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The Wind
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The Wind |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Wind The wind that kissed your cheeks today The same that touched my lips in play Embraced me like a velvet glove Kissed your cheek with all my love And I sent you a sky bouquet That fills your eyes this very day It’s filled with every precious hew That is a part of loving you. I also sent the mist of dawn That kissed you in the early morn The transfer was an easy one And on each eyelid it was done. Good morning sweet we are at home This loving earth where ere we roam I hear you talking feel the Braille And see your wind that fills my sail. It wends on me a snow white dove It sends each day your flight of love |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
how lovely and caring...wonderful write, soft and kind...your heart is truly in love with life and a very precious soul....very much enjoyed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! Oh my how I loved this message carried on the wind! Lovely, lovely! ~Smiles, hugs, and a cup of tea~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, you old softie!  This was an especially gentle and loving write. God is smiling--He loves the purity of your love and the generosity of your heart--and He's proud of the talent He created!!!... Blessed be your union forevermore. Love & Eternal Light, EA |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy, I have read you each and every day, whether or not I could get a response noted... and you have always lifted me, or made me think and wonder, or give me reasons to giggle... or just left me with a smile. Thank you, Sy!  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very beautiful and tender. The sweet breeze carrying kisses and love. Love, Margherita  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ So glad you liked, Nancy, Thank you sweet. Kiss: Earth Angel, You are an Angel,  Sunshine, Love you too. Margherita, Thank you my dear, |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The wind that kissed your cheeks today The same that touched my lips in play Embraced me like a velvet glove Kissed your cheek with all my love And I sent you a sky bouquet That fills your eyes this very day It’s filled with every precious hew That is a part of loving you. I also sent the mist of dawn That kissed you in the early morn The transfer was an easy one And on each eyelid it was done. Good morning sweet we are at home This loving earth where ere we roam I hear you talking feel the Braille And see your wind that fills my sail. ==================================== OH GOOD GRIEF!!!!!!!!!!!! OHHOWILOVEWHENYOUWRITELIKETHIS!!!!  have mercy on the moth Sybabes... this is a sigh across the sky... a swoon into the moon. I am giddy from this romantic tender write of rhymes. And your timing is uncanny as I just returned from a morning walk around a nearby lake and while sitting on the bank by the waves...there was a warm summer breeze making the water ripple and blowing my hair... I should have known it was you there  this ones getting printed out and framed. Its divine.  All I can feel is this distance between you and me. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, you know that I love this. It's so pretty. Good morning sweet we are at home This loving earth where ere we roam I hear you talking feel the Braille And see your wind that fills my sail. Thank you for being you!!!! Heart hugs, dear Sy  Ethel (I'm going to keep this one) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Your answers are prettier than my poems. Randy and I have shed each a tear. And hear the breeze that reach our ear. WWRS Ethel And thank you for being you. |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
"And I sent you a sky bouquet That fills your eyes this very day" I don't believe a more beautiful bouquet has ever been sent... Well done. CG |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How beautifully romantic! *S* This left smiles, Sy... thank you! *S* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
big smile |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I whispered on the wind to you ... asking that your skies stay blue, wishing that your stars burn bright ... that you dance with moon's midnight. I prayed upon a summer's breeze ... to brush your cheek in loving tease, I asked the sun to shine upon your day ... and the stars to always light your way. I called on the clouds to share the sky ... so that you may fly on high, I requested the rain to softly fall ... and for a rainbow to give you a call. I told the flowers to bloom just for you ... to fill your world with pallet's hue. I wrote your name in silvered sand ... and walked your beaches of understand. All this I wished the wind to send ... so that your sweet dreams never end, upon these breezes of fancy free ... comes this poetic kiss to you from me.  *winkiewinkie* [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (06-25-2003 01:35 PM).] |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
hehe, what about the wind? loved it honey I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Just lovely Seymour. Oooh, what I wouldn't give for a nice cool breeze right now. It is over 90 degrees here! Whew. I think since I am late....Enchantress....ice tea please, and I have the butter tarts. hugs, Chris "Said you'd give me light... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
CastleGuard Thank you for the well done. suthern Smiles are good. passing, Loved the big smile JM, This responce I will keep. Wind The wind is yours too. LOL Chris, Ice tea will be fine. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh Seymour, this is beautiful, sweet friend, this had me crying as I want to be able to love this way and stop my love wherever she may be from waiting in vain! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
 That was BEAUTIFUL Thank You for sharing it with us!!! ))HUGS((( TimaSome women wait for something to change and nothing does, so they change themselves. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you my friend. timothysangel, Thank you for the read and reply. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sy, you've gone and done it now Mister! You've made me swoon!, this is beautiful and I'm saving it.Melissa Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well now, if that wasn't just about the prettiest thing I have read in a long time. I am glad a breeze was your inspiration for this one, and you sent it on wings of a dove |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Very lovely, Sy! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Melissa, The wind touches many cheeks, I'm sure it touched yours. Martie I've sent the wind to you many times. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, Forgive me for missing your responce. You know I love you. |
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