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Today Your Smile

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Ivy Rose
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0 posted 06-25-2003 02:18 AM       View Profile for Ivy Rose   Email Ivy Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Ivy Rose


Today your smile was brilliant
So much brighter than any star.
Yet your eyes captured me...
Today they were so green,
On other days
So very blue. Those eyes see
Through my soul, see the love
Within my being. I cannot hide
My thoughts from you. You know
Me too well. We don't need
Words to express the depth
Of what we feel. We know the person
Who resides on the inside so
Intimately. We are not dewy-eyed
Teenagers. We are mature adults...with
At least a half a century between us.
I know this one thing...I cannot
Imagine living this life without you.
You are treasure beyond treasure
And, I am the Queen of your heart
As you are the King of mine.

© Copyright 2003 Ivy Rose - All Rights Reserved
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart


1 posted 06-25-2003 03:14 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Bravo, well  spoken, I liked the entire poem, but loved the last two lines especially!
passing shadows
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2 posted 06-25-2003 03:38 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

just beautiful!
Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 06-26-2003 12:50 AM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is beautiful, sweet friend, in fact you have a whole eternity ahead together as love never dies and the smile is a light that souls together share! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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4 posted 06-26-2003 12:51 AM       View Profile for timothysangel1973   Email timothysangel1973   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit timothysangel1973's Home Page   View IP for timothysangel1973

  I love it!!

    Tima

Some women wait for something to change and nothing does, so they change themselves.
-Audre Lorde

Artic Wind
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5 posted 03-28-2009 03:22 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

You write with such beauty and passion! ~ Love is very hard to resist huh? Wonderful write and follow your heart to passion!


ARCTIC WIND
 
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