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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia

0 posted 2003-06-24 11:15 PM



WITHOUT YOU...

Time it goes so quickly
Time it goes so slow
Time is the universal answer
Time is what everyone knows

Thoughts of you go quickly
Thoughts of you go slow
Thoughts of you is my universal answer
Thoughts of you is the only thing I know

Time without you has gone quickly
Time without you has gone slow
Time without you is my universal answer
Time without you is all I know


Roniece Dawson-Bruce

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wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)
1 posted 2003-06-24 11:33 PM


Time is on our side?

Doesn't sound like it...

Like the poem

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2003-06-24 11:38 PM


wayoutwalt: thank you for your comment - wouldn't it be nice it TIME were on our side! Love reading your work by the way - you are indeed an accomplished poet! Bravo!
Roniece Dawson-Bruce

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2003-06-25 04:12 AM


yeah...sigh
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

4 posted 2003-06-25 08:24 AM


I believe when you care for someone, really love them, there isn't a day that goes by, not one, that you don't think of them fondly.  Thank you for sharing.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2003-06-25 07:38 PM


For some reason I end up with lots of women that don't have too much time for me...the more educated they are, the less time they have to spare...James
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
6 posted 2009-03-24 05:33 PM


Enjoyed this Write Deeply RDB! ~ Where have you been, in the future, you haven't been here for awhile, hoping everything is okay


ARCTIC WIND

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