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Shadows of Time Junior Member
since 2003-06-24
Posts 14 |
Staring at the topaz surface The shriveled, wilted, charred strand poking out Curled on the surface, alone A gentle hiss, a melodious click And a warm embrace surrounds it Bringing to life the little string Azure and crimson dance in the wind The topaz surface begins to recede Replaced by a marvelous ooze Ooze that reflects the nimble colors And in a puff, it’s all extinguished Charcoal and ash wrap up from the center Snaking up between us You smile, laughing at how I look at you And I get up and chase after you All over a little candle |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
lol, enjoyed your whimsical look at candle light fun |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
a really beautiful way to look at a candle  and love the use of topaz |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*smiling big here* |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I agree with everyone else! ~ Enjoyed  ARCTIC WIND |
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