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(On the Eve of) What Comes in Time

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


0 posted 06-24-2003 09:17 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


[On the Eve of] What Comes in Time

What came to me, in raucous times ago,
Were hues of blues to this poet's green eye,
That there be a place I would come to know
Where passions and poetry flew so high!

At times, seemingly lost, I thought I was
At bitter odds with my own cast-off ends
But that a muse should hear, then willed me "pause"
To unearth heart’s want, where soreness might mend

For this sweet craving I have had since youth
To convey a falling tears’ salty feel
In a place where poets gather, in truth
With a worldly family’s love, so real

What came in time, 'twas but a poet's dream
A place where hesitant hearts bared ~ in trust ~
What stayed in this mind?  A melody’s theme
With rhythm's delights, and an angel's dust

Where moths may flit over bards who might roar
While writers of angst, search seekers of truth
As mountains find peaked heights, lost souls hunt shores
As aged sages find their fountains of youth

What came in time, was a place most surreal
Where love plus life plus poets, equals Feel.

~*~

June 24, 2003

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (06-24-2003 09:18 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 06-24-2003 09:21 PM       View Profile for wranx   Email wranx   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wranx

Very, very nice Karilea! I sometimes wonder what would have happened if I had consodered writing in an earlier incarnation.

(Or, how long I would have continued)


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2 posted 06-24-2003 09:23 PM       View Profile for QjQ   Email QjQ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for QjQ

What came in time, was a place most surreal
Where love plus life plus poets, equals Feel.

what beautiful closing lines and words of poetry "K"

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

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3 posted 06-24-2003 09:28 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

From the sun of our earth
From the stars of our night
From the soul of our essence
From the heaven's lights.

From these and more, so much more comes
our home to us,  here among stars..

You,  dear lady...are but one of them
that burns ever brightly here...
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Somewhere in time~


4 posted 06-24-2003 09:30 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress


Dear Karilea..Passion's is all this and more..
and, you m'dear are our morning sun and evening sunset.
You go out of your way to do things
that make a difference in people's lives.
You have a beautiful way about you
that causes magical things to happen.
On the eve of your fourth anniversary here
may I say thank you so much for all you have brought to Passion's!
Happy Anniversary dear Lady!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~


~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~


[This message has been edited by Enchantress (06-24-2003 09:48 PM).]

scorpio
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5 posted 06-24-2003 10:06 PM       View Profile for scorpio   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for scorpio

Karilea..we always feel when we read your words...thank you for allowing us to experience your wisdom, talent and creativity..

believe in what your heart feels...

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just out of reach


6 posted 06-24-2003 10:52 PM       View Profile for Nightshade   Email Nightshade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nightshade's Home Page   View IP for Nightshade

Karilea....you are one special lady and have encouraged me when I was down - I thankyou for that. Plus, your poetry always is a pleasure to read. You are a bright light on a dark and foggy pathway. HAPPY ANNIVERSARY! hugs, Chris
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7 posted 06-24-2003 10:57 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Karilea...You have brightened my day with your sun so many times...I am thankful for you, as a poet and a friend.  
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8 posted 06-25-2003 12:22 AM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

Karilea,
you have proven to be a very good friend to have.
You are always there for whoever needs
you. I appreciate you and your
poetry and replies. Thank
you for being you,
Lady Sunshine.



Happy Anniversary, my friend

Heart Hugs to you  

Ethel
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9 posted 06-25-2003 01:11 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

....and the student, is still learning, from the best
and yes, Happy Anniversary @ Pip
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10 posted 06-25-2003 04:02 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

always in awe...
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11 posted 06-25-2003 08:48 AM       View Profile for Patricia   Email Patricia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Patricia

Oh Karilea...an endless chill runs through me.  Do you visit my mind?  Connections, my sister, connections.

Patricia

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Excellent... I am certainly glad to be a part of this, even if only a small part

~El Campeador

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

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13 posted 06-25-2003 09:48 AM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

Karilea,
===========================================
As aged sages find their fountains of youth
===========================================
Is that what keeps me coming back?

Lovely write dear lady.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Margherita
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14 posted 06-25-2003 09:53 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Love pours out from your pen and beauty, always.
Thank you for touching me too with your sunrays ....
Four years? Over 36000 sunrays shared ... WOW!
It IS wonderful to stay among poets indeed. Also inspiring each other.

Your words stir beautiful feelings.
Love, Margherita
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15 posted 06-25-2003 10:06 AM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Your eloquent words deserve an eloquent reply, but my words fail me, dear poetess...

Loving hugs,
Linda
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16 posted 06-25-2003 10:34 AM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

Karilea, I'm keeping this...to try  to learn some more from you........and just because.......
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17 posted 06-25-2003 11:02 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

What came in time, 'twas but a poet's dream
A place where hesitant hearts bared ~ in trust ~
What stayed in this mind?  A melody’s theme
With rhythm's delights, and an angel's dust

Where moths may flit over bards who might roar
While writers of angst, search seekers of truth
As mountains find peaked heights, lost souls hunt shores
As aged sages find their fountains of youth

What came in time, was a place most surreal
Where love plus life plus poets, equals Feel.

====================================

I cant imagine this place without you...
I hope we dont ever have to find out...
Youve penned a poets anthem with this superb write..and the moth is loving every alliteration and inner rhyme.
Happy Anniversary poetess Sun...
thank you for All that you share, teach and give here at pips and to me as friend.
You have touched so many here with your poetry and your loving spirit.
We grow in your light



All I can feel is this distance between you and me.
I can say I love you but I can't make you believe me
because touching is believing.

c.j.

[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (06-25-2003 11:03 AM).]

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18 posted 06-25-2003 12:05 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

That last line sums us well. *S* Beautiful poem to commemorate your anniversary... may it be a happy one! *S*
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19 posted 06-25-2003 04:21 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Excellent...James
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20 posted 06-25-2003 05:12 PM       View Profile for Ericc   Email Ericc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ericc

Beautiful!
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21 posted 06-26-2003 02:35 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

This is so very special Karilea and so are you my friend, my sis

Happy Anniversary Sunshinygirl

Maree.
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22 posted 03-30-2009 07:49 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

This is an amazing poetic piece here, your muse surely worked wonders with your amazing mind! ~ for sure


ARCTIC WIND
 
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