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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-06-24 09:10 PM


you've broken my heart
its laying on the floor
in a million peices
why cant you ever be gentle
why cant you ever think of other people?
are you incapible of that?
are you incapible of love?
for once in your life,
someone loves you for you
and all you can do is turn them down
break their heart
without cleaning it up
without out being there to help them
i loved you
its true
but now i wonder
was it really you i fell in love with
or the mask you always wear...

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timothysangel1973
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since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725
Never close enough
1 posted 2003-06-26 02:27 AM


YES!  I have felt that way.  One never knows who they are falling in love with until it's too late.  

The mask is easy to love....the one under the mask can leave us broken, and bent!

I feel your words!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2003-06-26 02:34 AM


very cool, I can relate
Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2009-03-30 07:46 PM


Love can surely be either heartbreaking or amazing! Bittersweet


ARCTIC WIND

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