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Broken Love

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exhale
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0 posted 06-24-2003 09:10 PM       View Profile for exhale   Email exhale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for exhale

you've broken my heart
its laying on the floor
in a million peices
why cant you ever be gentle
why cant you ever think of other people?
are you incapible of that?
are you incapible of love?
for once in your life,
someone loves you for you
and all you can do is turn them down
break their heart
without cleaning it up
without out being there to help them
i loved you
its true
but now i wonder
was it really you i fell in love with
or the mask you always wear...
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timothysangel1973
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1 posted 06-26-2003 02:27 AM       View Profile for timothysangel1973   Email timothysangel1973   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit timothysangel1973's Home Page   View IP for timothysangel1973

YES!  I have felt that way.  One never knows who they are falling in love with until it's too late.  

The mask is easy to love....the one under the mask can leave us broken, and bent!

I feel your words!
passing shadows
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very cool, I can relate
Artic Wind
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3 posted 03-30-2009 07:46 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Love can surely be either heartbreaking or amazing! Bittersweet


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