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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2003-06-24 07:40 PM


In Half, Come Next


My days were full back then with you.
I'd sip each sip to last day through.
But when it came to halfway mark
I'd reach for you to "more the spark"
and never let that taste of fine
below again, the halfway line
for always mine, that glass reflects
the full of you in half come next~~


M
* just a little diddy for you, Ethel

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-06-24 08:09 PM


  Very, very good, Maureen.
I love it.   Thank you!!  
Hugs to you, Lady,
Ethel

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2003-06-24 08:12 PM


You are quite welcome. I was bored tonight after eating dinner and wondering if and when a new poem would come to me and there it was in the challenge...I hope it "picks you up"

Thank you
hugs
M

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3 posted 2003-06-24 08:38 PM


Cute write M.  Looks to me like ya dun gud!

Being silly here....must be the weather
or something...

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2003-06-24 09:36 PM


Thanks Barry...it was a little nothing or maybe half a nothing
hugs
M

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5 posted 2009-03-22 02:22 PM


Very nice diddy NT!
~ Enjoyed this very much
you met the challenge
~ and you were
successful!!!!!!!!


ARCTIC WIND

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