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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-06-24 07:04 PM

Pointless

there is
no sleep
and what
would be
the point
in a bed
with no dreams

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2003-06-24 07:23 PM

definitely my feelings *s
M

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

2 posted 2003-06-24 07:28 PM

Ouch!

Good poem, but ooh, what a topic....

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Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

3 posted 2003-06-24 08:42 PM

That's where all my dreams are? Dang...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

4 posted 2003-06-24 08:44 PM

oo, this hit home

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2003-06-24 09:14 PM

As usual Helen you hit home and you say so much with little words. Your poems are always powerful!

Melissa

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

6 posted 2003-06-24 09:24 PM

exactly..goddamn..hugs

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

7 posted 2003-06-26 02:18 AM

Absolutely one of the best by far!

I loved it!

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2003-06-26 02:22 AM

is that why I can't sleep?
*hugs*

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2003-06-26 02:31 AM

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

10 posted 2003-06-26 02:34 AM

ty all
i hope not sea
i hope not

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

11 posted 2003-06-26 05:51 AM

oh you take my breath away H.

the ache is alive in your words.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

12 posted 2003-06-26 05:57 AM

Helen:

I usually fall asleep on the couch
yes . . . know this well
amazing insight Lady
xxoo

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

13 posted 2009-04-05 10:51 AM

This is a strong write here, shows true emotions!

ARCTIC WIND

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