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Shadows of Time
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since 06-24-2003
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0 posted 06-24-2003 06:28 PM       View Profile for Shadows of Time   Email Shadows of Time   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Shadows of Time


The slowing breaths you took
The panic and overwhelming distraught subsided
As I held you close
Your intoxicating fragrance filled my lungs
The warmth you radiated
I rocked your body slowly, comforting you
Trying to ease the trembling you were experiencing
Nothing was said, nothing was heard
Save for the gasps between your tears
The trickling flow soaked my shoulder as you rested you head
The darkness embraced us
As I embraced you
And held you close
© Copyright 2003 Shadows of Time - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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since 08-14-2001
Posts 37801
Somewhere in time~


1 posted 06-24-2003 06:35 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
A very lovely yet sad entrance piece here.
I know you will enjoy your stay with us..
take your time, have a look around..
read and reply to others..
and most of all, have fun!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

Earth Angel
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since 08-27-2002
Posts 40647
Realms of Light


2 posted 06-24-2003 06:37 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Enthralling sensations! Yours is a shoulder that would indeed comfort a damsel in distress!

Welcome to Passions! You are off to a great start with this wonderful write!

Warm welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel
David Carrson
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since 06-23-2003
Posts 27
Carrickfergus N. Ireland


3 posted 06-24-2003 06:46 PM       View Profile for David Carrson   Email David Carrson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for David Carrson

very descriptive I see the couple clearly. Welcome and enjoy from one newbie to another.
Patricia
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since 04-06-2003
Posts 2232
Missouri


4 posted 06-24-2003 06:55 PM       View Profile for Patricia   Email Patricia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Patricia

Very nice.  Great first post.  I will be looking for more from you.

Welcome to Passions!

Patricia
Sunshine
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Member Caelestus
since 06-25-99
Posts 67715
Listening to every heart


5 posted 06-24-2003 07:16 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


Oh, welcome to Passions!  Not everyone knows how to stand the line of here and now, but I have a feeling, you do.  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

nakdthoughts
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since 10-29-2000
Posts 19275
Between the Lines


6 posted 06-24-2003 07:24 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

Reminds me of a time~~

Thank you
M
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 06-19-2003
Posts 13093
SE PA


7 posted 06-24-2003 07:39 PM       View Profile for LeeJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LeeJ

absolutely beautiful..stunning poem...welcome
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


8 posted 06-25-2003 10:47 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

I think this needs another time around.
passing shadows
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since 08-26-99
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displaced


9 posted 06-25-2003 12:44 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

Welcome Welcome!
Midnitesun
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Gaia


10 posted 06-25-2003 01:39 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

There is much warmth of heart radiating from this post. Thank you for sharing.

WELCOME to Passions!
JamesMichael
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since 11-16-1999
Posts 31622
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


11 posted 06-25-2003 04:59 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Enjoyed...James
Shadows of Time
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since 06-24-2003
Posts 16


12 posted 06-25-2003 08:54 PM       View Profile for Shadows of Time   Email Shadows of Time   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Shadows of Time

Thank you all for your support and kind words....

*sigh*

This however is not a ficticous moment, but one I can not forget, as it is etched into my mind forever.  One of the few nights with the one I love.  One of the few nights I may never have again.

Thank you all...
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 09-16-2007
Posts 8075
Realm of Supernatural


13 posted 03-24-2009 06:15 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

WELCOME TO PIP, I know I am a little late lol 6 years later


ARCTIC WIND
 
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