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LeeJ
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0 posted 2003-06-24 03:08 PM


Moment of completeness
spiritual oneness, lives in significance
indicating an intimacy beyond human comparison
where our eyes meet, mystically, beyond so vivid
seems as if we've been publishing a biography
we merge in the light of nature
depth of seas
an anthology of true soul, learning to play cellos
where beauty choreogrpahs time in memories
past, present and future adorations
Nuturing a pregnancy beyond..embreyo of universal compassion
Death cannot destrory or consume that eternal flame of our song
it preserves, outnumbers and floats fresh, free and alive
fluent blood of earthened meaning
radiant passions saturated...miracles convening
shaping even...filmy tears upon flesh
climbing mountains
together bequeather with children's feet
chisel and share a most ardent life of love
never ending, over flowing
leaving me breathless in a smooth softened glow


By Lee J.




© Copyright 2003 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-06-24 03:33 PM


Death cannot destrory or consume that eternal flame of our song
it preserves, outnumbers and floats fresh, free and alive
fluent blood of earthened meaning
radiant passions saturated...miracles convening
shaping even...filmy tears upon flesh
climbing mountains
together bequeather with children's feet
chisel and share a most ardent life of love
never ending, over flowing
leaving me breathless in a smooth softened glow


This is absolutely beautiful, Lee.
I enjoyed reading it.  
Hugs  
Ethel

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2003-06-24 03:34 PM


Love the part about the cellos...James
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2003-06-24 03:40 PM


When I read this poem, I got the distinct impression that you are in love--correction, in LOVE!!!---and you expressed it divinely!   

Warm hugs,
EA


gemjop
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Pencilveinia, USA
4 posted 2003-06-24 04:32 PM


i remember this feeling. wonderfully expressed.
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2003-06-24 04:37 PM


Ohhh Myyyy!! ...*Sigh*...

Artic Wind
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6 posted 2009-01-23 02:05 PM


This one speaks from ones heart!!!


ARCTIC WIND

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