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Open Poetry #27

inspired by Kaoru

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2003-06-24 01:40 PM

walking brrrrrfoot
in the snow
is an oddly way to go
but, you know,
you never know
till you give
your common sense a throw
and join the
throng in to and fro.

©June 24, 2003

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-06-24 01:46 PM

Ah, this is cute..
but I would be afraid of frost-bitten toes.
Although reading this did cool me off a bit on a 90 degree day.

Now I must find Kaoru's piece that inspired this.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
you haven't been listening.~

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

2 posted 2003-06-24 03:48 PM

This is so great! I love it!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2008-08-13 10:02 PM

Cute Write VAS! very interesting poetic Write

ARCTIC WIND

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2008-08-13 11:05 PM

Hard to believe this is being read at this late date. Haven't been here in nigh on to forever. Thanks for taking time to dig way back for this one and Juniper Itch.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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