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Open Poetry #27
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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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0 posted 2003-06-24 01:11 PM


Closing your eyes takes you to a temple overgrown with grapes
Plump red collages dancing ore dark green carpets of leaves
Multiple spawning amethyst mushrooms budding from armchairs
Transfixed by charismatic air, flickering shadows red and blue everywhere
Changing direction in unison…communing even double coupons
Remarkable nature of the arts, pinned to a chain-linked fence, like photographs
Surrounded by afternoon light, like a cloud drifting incense
I don’t know what to think, as evolution corresponds repetition within open eyes
To a body of gatherings setting rhymes of composition some slow, some high
Like a ribbon of moonlight over an alliance of prose, our journey theoretical
Souvenir’s of compassionate imagery, refining golden meadows
Ambiguously describing nature pronounced by bicentennial palms
Demonstrating the existence of relative poetic balance, contented nuance
As is your wanton to those who focus dominant frameworks of themes
Messengers enthusiastic, insuring sequential gymnastic poetry
Written by the passion of human language from inside common man
Overflowing powerful feelings, from emotions recollected hallmark fans
Transcendent moments in an instance of emotions sublime
Conveying critical ideas in forms of holographs from the mind
Within this pensive imagination, content and bliss of solitude
Interactions kiss a moment upon our inner eye, reflecting, and weighty hues
Light flashing off ocean waves is a wonderment of twilight spray
Bringing waves and floods of feelings, as a natural world describes its ballet
Dancing with my heart in a wise passiveness, by conscious art, a domed decree
Thought combines potential meaning from sacred rivers of insight amply
As we step within these multiples, intense synergy interacts
Within each unit of thought rising, finding independence
So….
She strolled within the morning light
And steps onto a lawn
Regarding that which was forbidden
Forever calming fierce winds blown
Specific moments, penetrating like an anniversary week
Floors descend upon our lives, but breathe eternity


© Copyright 2003 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-06-24 01:28 PM


LeeJ
That's a whale of a sail and I'm exhausted.
LOL enjoyed.

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
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2 posted 2003-06-28 01:26 AM


terrific  lee,,  enjoyed,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

3 posted 2003-06-28 03:32 PM


And yes, this is the Mecca I look for...

shaking my head.

Your mind is so fertile and I love the journeys you generously allow us to experience.

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