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Midnitesun
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Crawling around naked
in someone else’s mind
can be risky
but enlightening,
rewarding,
passionately stimulating.
You should try it sometime.

But beware...
there could be land mines
and hidden agendas
as well as golden treasures
or sweetest honeydew
to wade through.
And when you are ready to depart?
Be prepared to leave behind
a part of your heart.

Crawling around naked
in someone else’s mind
can be risky.

Are you a Braveheart?
© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 06-24-2003 12:51 PM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader

Not a Braveheart.....will a Foolheart do?

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2 posted 06-24-2003 12:54 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Yep!

Intriguing write, Dear Sun of Mid of Nite!

Luvs 'n hugs,
EA

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3 posted 06-24-2003 12:54 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

LOL at that reply. You're probably closer to the right name. thanks Ed

and Linda, glad you enjoyed this one

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (06-24-2003 12:55 PM).]

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4 posted 06-24-2003 01:03 PM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

(chuckling).... ok..I enjoyed the poem and understand the meaning... I just couldn't get over the visual of someone crawling around naked in my head and finding all those broken things to cut their hands and knees on.......

nice write... and I did enjoy

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5 posted 06-24-2003 01:14 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

just keep kneepads on
thanks for reading, Ron
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6 posted 06-24-2003 01:28 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

heh heh...much enjoyed the images this brought to mind Kacy!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

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YES!! I've often said that certain minds here would be a wonder to walk barefoot in...
so much to learn...
we can always roll naked in the poetry...
Im not afraid of paper cuts
COOL write poetess Kacy.

All I can feel is this distance between you and me.
I can say I love you but I can't make you believe me
because touching is believing.

c.j.

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thanks Nancy and JM
hehe, we are all brave hearts, aren't we?
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The heart, has always been the bravest part.

As far as crawling naked in me pumpkin?

One could find it most disconcerting, I know that I certainly do! (It's all icky and squishy and you never know when a bunch of bric-a-brac is gonna fall on you, trapping you in the mired memories(?)of times gone wrong and leaving you there grasping at any old fragment of some broken dream in hopes of finding enough purchase to just get back to your knees, perhaps enabling you to get a glimpse of the exit...and....Uh, what was the question?)

Oh, yeah...Love this, Kacy

Ed
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LOL, was there a question???
thanks wranx, glad that you enjoyed this write, even if it's a bit bizarre
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Midnite...there is a risk to opening any door... both someone elses and your own.  Enjoyed this!
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speaking of braveness and nakedness it would take a braveheart to see me naked..grins
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13 posted 06-24-2003 09:29 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

You can only imagine the images that came
to the frontal lobes of my mind.  Yeah,
they did...

This is great...thanx!
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14 posted 06-25-2003 12:19 AM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

Martie, yes, the doorway can be scary, but we are adventurous, right?

Raph, LOL, I doubt that. But perhaps that visual image should be sent privately to my email?

Magnus, LOL, well, are you just going to tease, or will you describe those visuals?
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15 posted 06-25-2003 12:48 AM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

I tried that! Found a camel haired bikini!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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ROTFL! I knew I lost that thing somewhere in the dark!
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..found some interesting messages here, especially the camel haired bikini!  wow!  Anyway, I'm a braveheart...bring it on!
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18 posted 06-25-2003 12:58 AM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

Kahlil, lol, have you ever tried to ride a camel? Glad you enjoyed this write of madness.
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19 posted 06-25-2003 01:28 AM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

Yup! I'm bitin' my lip, hard.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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cool write
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Nope...you are not leaving yet!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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hahaha, this was especially fun to read with this flu bug fever that is making my head dizzy.  Visuals!
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Some of Life's pleasures are worth risking ....


    ... by the way, your cupboards are far from being bare!
                

              Thanks for the dreams I know I will be having!!
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(big hugggsssssssss) Kind of reminds me of Atticus Finch in "To Kill A Mockingbird", with the advice he offers "Sometimes you've got to crawl into another persons skin and walk around in it!". (sigh) I think only this method is going to help us understand each other better, but unfortunately many cowards only judge the book by its cover and read the gossip like the cover of a People magazine! (sad sigh) So to do this would be a noble task, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

 
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