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papabear
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0 posted 2003-06-24 12:34 PM


Dictation
Alone in a room,
jazz helps me find my flow.
A single candle flickers,
I’m inspired by the glow.

I close my eyes and relax,
reminiscing about the man I use to be
No thoughts, just inspiration,
dictation from the poet inside me.

© Copyright 2003 Cozean Louis Hedrick - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2003-06-24 12:37 PM


I'm certainly pleased that you listen to the dictation from the poet within you!

Happy hugs,
EA
P.S. Sending you lots of candles to keep the inner poet dictating to you forever!

papabear
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2 posted 2003-06-24 01:33 PM


Earth Angel

Thanks for the Luv....

[This message has been edited by papabear (06-24-2003 01:35 PM).]

suthern
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3 posted 2003-06-24 04:34 PM


I like this... and definitely identify. *S* I call myself the transcriber for my muse... she bellows, I write! LOL
Patricia
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4 posted 2003-06-24 05:19 PM


No thoughts, just inspiration,
dictation from the poet inside me.

Wow, I loved this line.  I had to read it aloud a couple of times.  Papa Bear, you did well with your transcription.

Patricia

nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2003-06-24 08:15 PM


I'm often inspired by the glow of candles...
nice thoughts
*s
M

papabear
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6 posted 2003-06-25 04:44 PM


Suthern, Thanks for the Luv

Patricia, Thank you... I wrote that line while watching a jazz band and later wrote the poem from it...

nakdthoughts, Thanks... I also do a lot of my writing with candels burning and jazz in the background...

Artic Wind
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7 posted 2009-03-24 04:32 PM


Keep on kicking in your muse! ~ THIS is good stuff


ARCTIC WIND

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