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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-06-24 12:27 PM



More Than Friends

It isn't easy sharing hearts  
and that of more beyond
With pain that aids the growth of each
bewaring bearer's bond.
The telling of the afterstorms,
the promises unkept
Impressions first and then of last
and those in words we wept.

It isn't easy, when you're gone
and fending emotions tried
Leaves the visions far behind
unmasking that of hide.
The journey all too painful, some
dreamscaped in reserved time.
The touching of a friendship holds
more than these words in rhyme.

In twisted thoughts to rearrange,
assuring us deserved
Addictions lending memories
to tease what eyes observed
Sometimes what seems it is is not
sometimes what's not it  is
Just part of life and lessons learned,
no failures in this quiz.

The hours in a day too short
to which in words my friend
I'm reaching out to touch your world
to see you smile again.


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2003-06-24 12:29 PM


Loving thoughts, loving gestures, loving poem...

Angel blessings,
EA

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2003-06-24 03:09 PM


Nice writing...James
garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-06-24 03:17 PM


Maureen, these are such beautiful thoughts
that you have put into words. You have a very
tender heart, dear Lady. I hope that the one
this is written for and meant for sees it and
feels the love that you have written into it.  
I could feel the love you are sharing.
Thank you for sharing it with us.  
Hugs to you, sweet Lady  
Ethel

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just out of reach
4 posted 2003-06-24 03:44 PM


Lovely write Maureen. Chris

"Said you'd give me light...
...but you never told me about the fire."

~Stevie Nicks~  
      

    

Susan Caldwell
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Florida
5 posted 2003-06-24 03:50 PM


Very nice!!

Susan

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
6 posted 2003-06-24 06:19 PM


It seems we both have to keep touching.
Well done, Maureen.
Sandra

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Realm of Supernatural
7 posted 2009-03-22 02:05 PM


It isn't easy, when you're gone
and fending emotions tried
Leaves the visions far behind
unmasking that of hide.................."

Spoken with definite Truth


ARCTIC WIND

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