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Once we were beautiful
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Once we were beautiful |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Once we were beautiful now we stare ashen eyed across the room I once ran through dutiful skies lay at the back of my mind I would have stayed still I leave here anyway there were stars in my eyes but they werent the ones that i gazed upon with you and the wondering why universe appeared so huge comparisions from here to then it all fades to black. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
gemjop The top of the morning to you,  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Once we were beautiful"--well, one of you still is!--YOU!!!  Lovin' hugs, EA |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Beautiful poem, and filled with emotion..... ....but as for that "once" thing....check nearest mirror..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes, I know...James |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
there were stars in my eyes but they werent the ones that i gazed upon with you This hurts, sweet Gemma.......  Hugs to you, my little friend   Ethel |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
deep feeling write...made my heart hurt...hope all is well, and you are still very beautiful....and don't you forget it. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Thankyou for all your kind words. In loss, memories of the beautiful times never cease, and sometimes cloud the view of how it really was. we shared beautiful moments, but i ignored all that was wrong. i really do appreciate your replies, you make me feel like smiling again. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Ah Earth Angel beat me to the response and yanno you look much better in women's clothes then a welshman would..grins phbllt i couldnt resist..laugh damn you laugh [This message has been edited by Aenimal (06-24-2003 10:13 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh...deep sigh |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed this G!  ARCTIC WIND |
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