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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2003-06-23 11:09 PM



I can almost taste the dampness
touch the fog
and see the chill,
as I stagger lonely homeward
feeling sunrise still unseen
I wonder,
is today to be
another day,
glutted on obscenities,
just like the day
just passed away,
just another day
to bury yesterday's tomorrows.

©2003 by icebox

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littlewing
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1 posted 2003-06-23 11:11 PM


Ice . . .
you are a good man indeed
speechless over here
you have spoken words right out of his mind
excellent vision
He will appreciate this much
I am quite sure  
xxoo

Aenimal
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2 posted 2003-06-23 11:12 PM


I wish I had the words..you're a good man and I'm touched..by touched i mean grateful not psychotic..although upon reflection both do apply. Thanks much my friend this means more to me than I can properly express without coming off as a Hallmark moment.
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3 posted 2003-06-23 11:24 PM


Good, ice....very good. There is much in you.

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garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-06-23 11:47 PM


Iceman, this is nice of you to write like this for our Raph. I can tell that he appreciates it, even if he tries to kid about it....LOL He does hate the Hallmark write, doesn't he?
Thanks,
Ethel

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Gaia
5 posted 2003-06-24 12:14 PM


you are so cool
Martie
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6 posted 2003-06-24 12:26 PM


icebox.....  
passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2003-06-24 04:32 AM


awesome write, just like a brother to a brother
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8 posted 2003-06-24 08:24 AM


Seems to me you have been there Ice..and know the feeling intimately... very nice work.. nice indeed.


Artic Wind
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9 posted 2008-08-13 01:52 PM


I'll bring the shovels lol


ARCTIC WIND

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