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Forever Waiting
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Forever Waiting |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Forever I'll be waiting Waiting forever for you You who brings the sunlight With your smile Forever I'll be waiting Waiting forever for your touch A touch that makes the very follicles on my skin Tremble with pleasure and Intense heat Forever I'll be waiting Waiting forever for your scent The scent of a thousand red roses Roses mature in their crimson passions Forever I'll be waiting Waiting forever for the sound The sound of love and Of a lover's song Whispering in the distant eves and eves to come Forever I'll be waiting Waiting forever for hope The hope that brings forever my way And makes life seem less than a day But in the morn and dawn of an early lifetime The sun will peak There will be your shadow A shadow intangible by the human spirit My spirit now yearns for one One of you One of your touches One of your scents One of your sounds One hope Forever and ever again I'll still be waiting Waiting forever until tomorrow Knowing not what this new venture of life will bring Knowing only the feeling of Waiting forever Forever waiting is my current state Waiting forever for a feeling Feelings I have But have not had the feeling of you Of life Of love Our love forever spent as one Yet when forever comes I will still be waiting For you yv [This message has been edited by yv (06-23-2003 11:10 PM).] |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Thank you. That's all, just....thank you. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
dreams are nice now and then...may your wish come true  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A poem of deep yearning, hopefully soon a knock shall come upon one's door. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
enjoyed this read, nice ending line |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
I'm waiting, too... “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Yet when forever comes I will still be waiting For you I love the soft beauty of this... well done! |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Much enjoyed this one! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Hopefully the one you love will come home! ARCTIC WIND |
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spritrider87 Member
since 2003-05-31
Posts 294NH |
-smiles and bows- well done. I hope things work out for you and that your forever once they are there never ends. |
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