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Forever Waiting

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yv
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0 posted 06-23-2003 10:15 PM       View Profile for yv   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for yv

Forever I'll be waiting
Waiting forever for you
You who brings the sunlight
With your smile

Forever I'll be waiting
Waiting forever for your touch
A touch that makes the very follicles on my skin
Tremble with pleasure and
Intense heat

Forever I'll be waiting
Waiting forever for your scent
The scent of a thousand red roses
Roses mature in their crimson passions

Forever I'll be waiting
Waiting forever for the sound
The sound of love and
Of a lover's song
Whispering in the distant eves and eves to come

Forever I'll be waiting
Waiting forever for hope
The hope that brings forever my way
And makes life seem less than a day

But in the morn and dawn of an early lifetime
The sun will peak
There will be your shadow
A shadow intangible by the human spirit

My spirit now yearns for one
One of you
One of your touches
One of your scents
One of your sounds
One hope

Forever and ever again
I'll still be waiting
Waiting forever until tomorrow
Knowing not what this new venture of life will bring
Knowing only the feeling of
Waiting forever

Forever waiting is my current state
Waiting forever for a feeling
Feelings I have
But have not had the feeling of you
Of life
Of love

Our love forever spent as one
Yet when forever comes
I will still be waiting
For you


yv

[This message has been edited by yv (06-23-2003 11:10 PM).]

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1 posted 06-23-2003 10:20 PM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader

Thank you.


That's all, just....thank you.

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2 posted 06-23-2003 10:44 PM       View Profile for ecrivan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ecrivan's Home Page   View IP for ecrivan

dreams are nice now and then...may your wish come true
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3 posted 06-23-2003 10:56 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

A poem of deep yearning, hopefully soon
a knock shall come upon one's door.
passing shadows
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4 posted 06-24-2003 04:47 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

enjoyed this read, nice ending line
El_Campeador
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5 posted 06-24-2003 08:43 AM       View Profile for El_Campeador   Email El_Campeador   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit El_Campeador's Home Page   View IP for El_Campeador

I'm waiting, too...

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

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6 posted 06-25-2003 11:19 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Yet when forever comes
I will still be waiting
For you

I love the soft beauty of this... well done!
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Much enjoyed this one!
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Hopefully the one you love will come home!


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9 posted 04-06-2009 11:36 AM       View Profile for spritrider87   Email spritrider87   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spritrider87

-smiles and bows- well done. I hope things work out for you and that your forever once they are there never ends.
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