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Jason Lyle
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With my darkling

0 posted 2003-06-25 09:30 PM


Deep as we are
often we touch
only the surface

and quickly we say
in her words have
I known her

As deep as we are

Glimpses we see
of hearts and we mingle
as deep as we are

and dreams we
will speak, and also misfortune
as deep as we are

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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2003-06-25 09:35 PM


"Deep as we are
often we touch
only the surface"

got me at the beginning

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
2 posted 2003-06-25 09:39 PM


Stunning piece of work Jason
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just out of reach
3 posted 2003-06-25 09:56 PM


Awesome Jason! Me likes! Chris

"Said you'd give me light...
...but you never told me about the fire."

~Stevie Nicks~  
      

    

Ceinwyn
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4 posted 2003-06-25 09:58 PM


yes stunning and then some *sigh*

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2003-06-26 02:38 AM


yes...sigh
littlewing
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New York
6 posted 2003-06-26 06:14 AM


Jason:

awesommme write
you said it all right here:

Deep as we are
often we touch
only the surface


Why is it like that?
Goddddd . . .
xxoo

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
7 posted 2003-06-26 06:35 AM


Enjoyed reading about your deep Love!

A Romantic Heart

Gina Culliney
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8 posted 2003-06-29 02:56 PM


Well penned Darkling as usual!
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