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Open Poetry #27

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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-06-23 06:56 PM

Maintenance

there are
some needs
I have
that the closest
I will ever
come to
are
the lines
on these pages

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2003-06-23 07:16 PM

Helen, this is a poem which makes one sit
and think really hard. Well said.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-06-23 07:43 PM

Amen
Love to you Helen
xxoo

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2003-06-23 07:46 PM

Like whispered dreams kept close to heart. Well said.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2003-06-23 08:53 PM

Yes....I sit here reading poetry and listening to Saffire in the background, and I think that you are exactly right....every word, including the title, perfectly said, perfectly true.

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Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

5 posted 2003-06-23 09:19 PM

all i know is....right now one of mine is being fulfilled...reading you.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

6 posted 2003-06-23 10:35 PM

yes..

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-06-24 04:51 AM

love your lines, as always

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

8 posted 2003-06-26 01:57 AM

Breathless I am, I am,..........I was going to copy my favorite line...., but I would've just re-posted the poem for you futher down under the replies....because I LOVE THE ENTIRE THING!!

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Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

9 posted 2009-03-28 10:48 PM

Pip is addicting isn't it! ~ So much fun reading and replying and making poet friends

ARCTIC WIND

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