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WindSong
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0 posted 06-23-2003 05:54 PM       View Profile for WindSong   Email WindSong   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for WindSong

Work + Boredem + Paper + Pen = POEM!
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~*~ Turn Around ~*~

I never saw such a sad face.
I never saw your eyes or teeth
or a touch of heaven upon your heart.
Perhaps if you turned around, and let
me see you for you and not what others see-
Don't be scared,
I won't hurt you.
For you are forever more
a great person.
Turn around dear one
and show me your face,
those frightened eyes,
and that heart that we all
love so much.

~*~ Turn Around ~*~

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Peace love and happiness be with all you forever and always!

"Many a false step is made by standing still." -Chinese Fortune Cookie

© Copyright 2003 Kirah - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 06-23-2003 06:31 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

You see without seeing.
Who would not turn around, being invited so lovingly?
Lovely write, dear Windsong.
Love, Margherita
WindSong
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2 posted 06-23-2003 07:42 PM       View Profile for WindSong   Email WindSong   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WindSong

Thanks. Peace!

"Many a false step is made by standing still." -Chinese Fortune Cookie

littlewing
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since 03-02-2003
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3 posted 06-23-2003 08:03 PM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

Kirah:

Jesus this is beautiful . . .
if this is what happens when you
are walking and bored
I cannot wait to see when you are
concentrating! lol
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (06-23-2003 08:04 PM).]

Startime55
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4 posted 06-23-2003 08:06 PM       View Profile for Startime55   Email Startime55   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Startime55

You wish to see the soul within the eyes...a good heart and dear person you reveal in the words you pen from your heart...Beautiful..
WindSong
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5 posted 06-23-2003 08:30 PM       View Profile for WindSong   Email WindSong   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WindSong

littlewing, you'd have to read more of my stuff to see what happens when I "concentrate"...I can't concentrate when I right otherwise it comes out crap, but when I don't...it comes out like this...Thanks for you warm reply, it really made my day a bit better...Peace!

Star...Hmm...I forget what I was gonna say! Darn it! I guess it was a simple thank you, you also made by day a bit better...like everyone else here, love ya!

May Peace, Love and Happiness fill your hearts always and forever...
~*~ Kirah ~*~

"Many a false step is made by standing still." -Chinese Fortune Cookie

Earth Angel
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6 posted 06-23-2003 08:35 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Kirah, your caring words were sung as a beautiful song on a warm, and gentle wind.

Very loving--and lovely...

Loves'n hugs,
Linda
WindSong
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7 posted 06-23-2003 08:43 PM       View Profile for WindSong   Email WindSong   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WindSong

*very delicately replies* Ow, I mean Aw, thank you Linda. (Sorry, I'm in a lot of pain.) I was bored at work. I was able to write two poems in 15 minutes. I was giving a girl her lunch break...The other one is in Teen Poetry #6. But anyways, thank you for your support and your awesome poems! Peace!

~*~ Kirah ~*~

"Many a false step is made by standing still." -Chinese Fortune Cookie

passing shadows
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8 posted 06-24-2003 05:15 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

LOVE THIS!

and love your signature line too
WindSong
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9 posted 06-24-2003 08:05 AM       View Profile for WindSong   Email WindSong   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WindSong

Thanks passing...Those chinse fortune cookies sure tell the truth sometimes, don't they? peace.

"Many a false step is made by standing still." -Chinese Fortune Cookie

WinterWren
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10 posted 06-24-2003 10:54 PM       View Profile for WinterWren   Email WinterWren   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WinterWren's Home Page   View IP for WinterWren

I finally got around to reading some of yours that I've missed.
And I gotta say, Im glad I did.
I really love this one, short but sweet.
It just might be my favorite of yours, though it would be tough to pick between your other works.
Excellent Job Sweets, keep it up!

WinterWren
Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have.

wayoutwalt
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11 posted 06-24-2003 11:31 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

sounds like a great song.... peace to you
WindSong
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12 posted 06-25-2003 07:43 AM       View Profile for WindSong   Email WindSong   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WindSong

Lol. Winter,  theres' plenty more where that came from.

For everyone, I appreciate what you have to say to me. Anything you say will be taken to heart because I'm sure that's where you release is, is it not?

Peace.



~*~ Kirah ~*~

"Many a false step is made by standing still." -Chinese Fortune Cookie

Wind
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13 posted 06-25-2003 07:07 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

That was really sweet, and I don't know if you realized it, but your poem is in the shape of a girl.

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

WindSong
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14 posted 06-25-2003 09:52 PM       View Profile for WindSong   Email WindSong   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WindSong

really? I can't see it...But thanks! lol. Peace!

"Many a false step is made by standing still." -Chinese Fortune Cookie

timothysangel1973
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Never close enough


15 posted 06-25-2003 10:34 PM       View Profile for timothysangel1973   Email timothysangel1973   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit timothysangel1973's Home Page   View IP for timothysangel1973

Beautiful imagery.  I feel like you are talking about someone I know....Me possibly???   HeHeHe.....Tima

Some women wait for something to change and nothing does, so they change themselves.
-Audre Lorde

Wind
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16 posted 06-25-2003 10:36 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

She's got a hat on her head. It's just her face

or it could be a lamp
I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

[This message has been edited by Wind (06-25-2003 10:37 PM).]

WindSong
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17 posted 06-26-2003 08:03 AM       View Profile for WindSong   Email WindSong   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WindSong

Timothysangel....- Hehe. Thanks! Peace!

Wind- I see the lamp shade, just not the...girl.
Peace. ~*~ Kirah ~*~

"Many a false step is made by standing still." -Chinese Fortune Cookie

Artic Wind
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18 posted 09-07-2009 12:06 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

This is a loving poem. Good message here, everything should think in that positive light.


ARCTIC WIND
 
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