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Hockeychick19
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0 posted 2003-06-23 05:32 PM


Angry, confused, sad,
Why does life sometimes treat me bad,
I sit here and get mad,
Always frustrated,

This world is so cold,
I don’t fit in this mold,
So I’m told.

I begin to run,
Where there is no light, no sun,
It is here,
That I hold in all fear.

Angry, confused, sad,
Why does life sometimes treat me bad,
I sit here and get mad,
Always frustrated,

This world is so cold,
I don’t fit in this mold,
So I’m told.

As I cross these unsteady bridges,
I breathe deep,
Air so raw it stings my lungs,
I can’t scream, I can’t cry,
Please someone help me,
I don’t want to be alone,
Don’t let me die.

Angry, confused, sad,
Why does life sometimes treat me bad,
I sit here and get mad,
Always frustrated,

This world is so cold,
I don’t fit in this mold,
So I’m told.

Angry, confused, sad,
Why does life sometimes treat me bad,
I sit here and get mad,
Always frustrated,

This world is so cold,
I don’t fit in this mold,
So I’m told.

© Copyright 2003 Kelly Gambon - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-06-24 05:52 AM


angry....yeah, I know, too well
timothysangel1973
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2 posted 2003-06-26 01:53 AM


Do any of us really fit in?  Maybe we should stop trying, and just be who ans what we are, and be happy doing it!

Wonderful write

Hockeychick19
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since 2002-10-29
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3 posted 2003-06-26 08:29 AM


Passing Shadows, we all know anger well and I'm glad that you could relate to this poem.

Timothysangel1973, you are absolutely right, but question for you is... Why bother trying to be happy about it if deep down inside some people like myself aren't happy about trying to fit in?  I just live life one day at a time and if someone doesn't like me that's their problem. I just right what I feel and that's all I can do. :-) Thanks I'm glad you like the poem.

~Kelly~

martina
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since 2003-06-19
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4 posted 2003-06-26 09:12 AM


YO Great one this time.you kicked ass seee you soon!!!!!!!
        Marina

Artic Wind
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5 posted 2009-09-07 01:03 PM


Everyone gets their own fair share of frustration.


ARCTIC WIND

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