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LastMoments
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since 2003-03-07
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0 posted 2003-06-23 05:31 PM



Look at my heart
Ceasing to breathe
Look at it drown
In deep parts of me
If it had only
One more chance
Would it lie empty
Or break out of its trance

Look at it bleed
All over the place
Look at it struggle
In lack of space
Kicking and turning
Flashing and burning
If it had the energy
Would it care anymore?
Or would it turn away

You made a trail
Deep inside of me
I looked up to the sky
To pull down the stars
But got caught in the time
And broke apart in vain
What made me believe you?
What made me this way

I can't see this anymore
I can't make what I am
I can only cherish what I'm not
And hope the rest just
Disappears

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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2003-06-24 05:53 AM


God! this is so sad!

are you okay?

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2008-08-13 01:35 PM


You write with such Emotion!

Hoping everything was okay


ARCTIC WIND

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