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Always Lisa
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0 posted 2003-06-23 03:35 PM


Lasting

Speak to me of lasting things
Like that night so long a go
Deep your breaths and soft your tough      
Held me tight and still the glow.

Always Lisa copyright 2003


© Copyright 2003 Always Lisa - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2003-06-23 03:42 PM


Hi, Lisa. Tender write...Wouldn't it be loverly if moments like that could  on forever...

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel

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2 posted 2003-06-23 03:48 PM



Oh, no, don't still the glow....

it's beautiful, Lisa!

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2003-06-23 07:26 PM


This is lovely. Who said poems have to be epics to pack a punch!
littlewing
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4 posted 2003-06-23 07:31 PM


Lisa:
Welcome to PIP!
Sorry I missed your entrance
I love this
It is difficult for me to
write in so few stanzas
xxoo

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-06-24 05:31 AM


very tender
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6 posted 2003-06-26 01:54 AM


I love it!
Artic Wind
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7 posted 2009-03-28 03:46 PM


Enjoyed this tender poem


ARCTIC WIND

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