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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-06-23 03:22 PM



Paradigm Mirrored

Reflections cast come back at one
a silver spoon inverts a face
a calm still lake shines one in grace
a clear glass shall cast reflection
but silvered glass? Introspection

To look beyond glassed-in mystery
to look behind the back of thee
to see within where beauty lies
a clear glass still casts inspection
but silvered glass? Paused reflection.

The most excellent mirror, if truth be told
are when my love's eyes are in my behold

01.15.01

© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-06-23 03:39 PM


Your love's eyes reflect the beauty that is you...

Love & Light,
Linda

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2 posted 2003-06-23 03:57 PM


You don't know how much I needed to read this today...
Smiling at you and whispering...'thank you'.
~Hugs, Hip-Sis~

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3 posted 2003-06-23 04:10 PM


indeed, you speak the truth. enjoyed
scorpio
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4 posted 2003-06-23 04:16 PM


They say the eyes mirror the soul...your words reflect truth that dwells in the heart..

believe in what your heart feels...

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5 posted 2003-06-24 06:09 AM


wow!
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6 posted 2003-06-24 06:51 AM


Reflections and refractions abound in here.

*squinting*

Penned with a prism.

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7 posted 2003-06-24 08:21 AM


The most excellent mirror, if truth be told
are when my love's eyes are in my behold

I love this, K.  To see ourselves through the eyes of someone who loves us.  Yes, it a wonderful mirror indeed.

Patricia


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8 posted 2003-06-24 02:35 PM


DAMN!

the high-pitched tone
of a perfect
pome

love this

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9 posted 2003-06-24 02:41 PM


LoTo look beyond glassed-in mystery

ved this write especially that line
breathtakingly beautiful write...thank you for sharing.

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10 posted 2003-06-24 03:36 PM


The most excellent mirror, if truth be told
are when my love's eyes are in my behold


This is  SO  true, Karilea.  
Thank you, my friend.  
Hugs  
Ethel


(Psssttt!!! How's the novel coming along?)


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11 posted 2003-06-24 07:30 PM


The most excellent mirror, if truth be told
are when my love's eyes are in my behold

says it all, Karilea
hugs
M

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12 posted 2003-06-24 08:36 PM


So beautifully true, Karilea!  
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13 posted 2003-06-25 01:05 AM


Beauty is truth, truth beauty....

You show both here.

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14 posted 2009-03-22 11:31 PM


This poem definitely reflects the beauty in you and your poetic pen Sunshine! ~ Favorite line here

"The most excellent mirror, if truth be told
are when my love's eyes are in my behold........"

to you
ARCTIC WIND

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