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Edder
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0 posted 2003-06-23 02:26 PM



flesh
shall not bind these kindred spirits
they exist as One
in a realm where physical law
holds no power
over souls born of the same Light
know
that in this there is
hope
for
peace
and
understanding

[This message has been edited by Edder (06-23-2003 03:44 PM).]

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Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-06-23 02:28 PM


Brilliantly penned. What part of GA?
Edder
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2 posted 2003-06-23 02:30 PM


Thanks Brad! all over currently near Macon

[This message has been edited by Edder (06-23-2003 02:31 PM).]

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3 posted 2003-06-23 02:32 PM


nicely done... the bold print on those key words add to the impact..and the opening just flows off the minds tongue..

I enjoyed...


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4 posted 2003-06-23 02:38 PM


"souls born of the same Light"--good reminder lest we forget...

Peace, Love & Eternal Light,
EA

Edder
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5 posted 2003-06-23 02:48 PM


Ron- thank you, tis a pleasure to see you here.

Linda- seems it's easy to forget. thanks for reading

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6 posted 2003-06-23 02:52 PM



I love it. Can I keep it?

Edder
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7 posted 2003-06-23 02:56 PM


silly girl! of course you can!
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8 posted 2003-06-23 03:20 PM


truly marvelous dahling..I quite enjoyed

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Edder
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9 posted 2003-06-23 03:23 PM


Kristen- yew soo sweet! tank ya!
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10 posted 2003-06-23 03:41 PM


Just a tiny typo in the 3rd line... Other than that, this beauty is perfect. *S*
Edder
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11 posted 2003-06-23 03:47 PM


thanks Ruth! my brain and my fingers don't always speak the same language.
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12 posted 2003-06-23 04:56 PM


~Deep sigh~ (In a good way!)

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

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13 posted 2003-06-23 05:25 PM


Well done,  a very wise write...with the
impact in the right places...like this one.

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14 posted 2003-06-23 06:59 PM


nice...h
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15 posted 2003-06-23 07:09 PM



Excellent, Ed...this is beautiful!

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16 posted 2003-06-23 07:13 PM


Very well thought, said aloud, and written....I like it!

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17 posted 2003-06-23 07:47 PM


Know/hope/peace/understanding

Ok the second one I have trouble with . . .

What a beautiful write Ed . . .
xxoo

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18 posted 2003-06-23 08:07 PM


Wonderful message taken to heart...if only all could Know...

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19 posted 2003-06-23 09:05 PM


GREAT BIG GRINS.

You birthed a beauty, Ed.

*shaking my head*

but smiling.

You've pleased the witch mightily.

I LOVE IT.

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20 posted 2003-06-23 09:09 PM


Nice -- thinking we have more than a name in common, Ed....

Ed

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Edder
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21 posted 2003-06-23 10:22 PM


Lauren- ~HUGS~ in a good way!

Barry- glad you thought so. thanks for reading

Helen- thank you dear

Karilea- thanks, glad you enjoyed it!

Tima-nice to meet you. thanks for the read.

Sue- we'll work on that "hope" thing.

Ed- wow! what a nice thing to say. thanks

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22 posted 2003-06-23 10:46 PM


completely beautiful

"flesh
shall not bind these kindred spirits
they exist as One"

*sigh*

Edder
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23 posted 2003-06-23 11:57 PM


ooopps i missed a few!

Startime- thank you so much.

Karen omg! how did i miss you up there! thanks for helping me with this one, you know i love ya!

Susan- thank you, i'm glad you enjoyed

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24 posted 2003-06-24 04:42 AM


wow Ed! I'm in love!
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25 posted 2008-08-12 10:49 PM


Binded for ever!


ARCTIC WIND

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