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pisumnux
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since 2003-06-11
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Troy, NY

0 posted 2003-06-23 01:16 PM


They say time flies when you're having fun,
like lying around awaiting the sun,
or eating some cheese while sipping some wine,
or gently massaging your lips with mine.
Wherever we go, whatever we do,
I'll always be happy if I'm with you.
I may not be great making a rhyme,
but when I'm with you, I lose track of time.
I'm going to stop before I get stuck.
Just know I love you, ...

"There are three things men can do with women: love them, suffer for them, or turn them into literature."
- Stephen Stills

© Copyright 2003 Andrew Housman - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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1 posted 2003-06-23 01:26 PM


How romantic. *sighs*

Cold hands means a warm heart

Magnus
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2 posted 2003-06-23 05:48 PM


You rhymed quite OK to me,  but of course
I knew you would...  Good poem...thanx.

Edder
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since 2003-04-02
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3 posted 2003-06-23 06:19 PM


~sigh~ neither can i. ooopps   well done
Margherita
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4 posted 2003-06-23 06:34 PM


Happy heart, very lovely poem!
Love, Margherita

littlewing
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5 posted 2003-06-23 08:02 PM


Andrew - this is so sweet
Has she seen this?
xxoo

pisumnux
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since 2003-06-11
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Troy, NY
6 posted 2003-06-23 08:14 PM


I don't think she has seen this yet, but she will when she checks the forum next.

"There are three things men can do with women: love them, suffer for them, or turn them into literature."
- Stephen Stills

Ratleader
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7 posted 2003-06-23 09:07 PM


....A sweet old-fashioned girl with heart so true,
One who likes to...



....read poetry with some wit in it!

Me too...and just did....

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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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Atlantic Beach,Fla
8 posted 2003-06-24 01:17 AM


very beautiful,i still don't know what ive done to inspire you to write such lovely poems for me.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


littlewing
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9 posted 2003-06-24 02:05 AM


awww how sweet . . .
passing shadows
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10 posted 2003-06-24 03:40 AM


nice
Artic Wind
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11 posted 2008-08-12 10:43 PM


Is it just me, or are you rhyming lol
you're cured, you can Rhyme now


ARCTIC WIND

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