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Paula Finn
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0 posted 2003-06-23 12:46 PM



Say goodbye sweet dream
Tomorrows dawn soon will break
Goodbye dream goodbye

Hold the feeling tight
Against the dawns sun shining
Stay with me dream, stay

Carry me gently
Til the twilight falls softly
And dreams come again

Stay with me dream, stay
Stay until the mornings light
Then to let you go.

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1 posted 2003-06-23 12:47 PM


Enjoyed this one
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2 posted 2003-06-23 01:00 PM


A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
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3 posted 2003-06-23 01:16 PM


Some dreams you just want to last forever...

Lovely.

Warm hugs,
EA

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4 posted 2003-06-23 02:11 PM


Paula, it's a shame to let those sweet dreams go. Why can't we bottle them up and drink them all day long?
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5 posted 2003-06-23 02:13 PM


Good write.

"There are three things men can do with women: love them, suffer for them, or turn them into literature."
- Stephen Stills

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6 posted 2008-08-12 06:38 PM


I love a good dream, you know, All the time when my dream is about to have the exciting conclusion, I am woken up from something lol
--That always seems to happen, thats beyond me

Nice write, now I am looking forward to going to sleep for a good dream to appear!

ARCTIC WIND

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