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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2003-06-23 11:13 AM



Sitting on the station,warm summer wind sweeps hotly onto my body and hair.
Th warm sun radiates on my face.

What are you doing? i wonder with longing?
Listening to music, watching people pass, i begin to think if they know of the deep love that i do,it gives me pleasure.

Sunday afternoon on the train station, but my mind is miles away.
Walking all over, thinking of you and your sweet face,listening to music of love.

Your world is probably more sedate, soft breeze blowing down the trail of the Lonesome Pine,through the forest, under the crystal sky above.

Sweet woman, the soft breeze travels the seas,
i listen closely and hear your voice upon it across the miles.

Here i am waiting...
for your words of love,
of your days,nights,laughter and beautiful smiles.

Are you walking in the perfect glowing light of love?
Eminating, exuding the power of love.
Walking by silver streams, filled with gold gleaming fish, even they love you, perfect pisces.

Do you walk the lonely trails,filed with wild flowers?
Scent of pine, wild wind whistling through your hair, forest princess.

Completely helpless am i, my love is like the biggest beacon, shinning brightly across to you, look out for my light.

Tears slowly run form the corners of my eyes, falling on my heart, please send your love, true, pure and bright.

Watching over you, i am an angel, see me fly in your sky, at midnight's stroke,to fill you with rapture.

Come let us fly in the velvet milky way, love each other through the night, our complete love of no measure.

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Georgia
1 posted 2003-06-23 12:04 PM


nice
Ceinwyn
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2 posted 2003-06-23 12:42 PM


bump

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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2003-06-23 04:35 PM


Oh how my heart feels this one, I feel it too, my king! beautiful your heart is to me!

Your Vermillion Queen

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2003-06-24 02:17 AM


You were thinking of me at the same time, did you see my poem about you, "Celestial Tears" ? My feelings over the weekend while writting this poem is the same as yours above! WOW! what connection, chemistry! I am blown away!

By the way I was in the pines looking into the heavens and thinking of you!

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (06-24-2003 02:22 AM).]

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-06-24 03:35 AM


such longing and love here...always enjoy the writings
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