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Bonfirelight
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since 2003-06-19
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London, England

0 posted 2003-06-23 10:47 AM



tick tock
tick tock
the words are locked
blank page rage
at being mocked
by the screaming silence
this cage
this sheet
And dreading a repeat defeat
by this paper
So smugly incomplete

So sink another drink
to think
about how this ink
could form the missing link
the well from which the words could merge
to form a spark
to end this dirge

no joy.
no luck.
the pages mock
and still the block
tick tock
tick tock

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-06-23 10:52 AM



Not so blocked...Welcome to Passions!  If you think you're challenged by a moody muse, well then, we can introduce you around and you can show your muse JUST what happens when you get to Passions...so I hope you're in for a pleasant sit back and read, share, visit our various forums....and just enjoy!

Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

JilGirl
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2 posted 2003-06-23 10:57 AM


Writer's block? Methinks NOT!
If 'twere there, you sure
cracked through it with THIS
creative, clever, well penned
write!

WELCOME!

Blessings!
Shirl

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

Brad Majors
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Georgia
3 posted 2003-06-23 12:06 PM


well done. welcoem to passions
Paula Finn
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missouri
4 posted 2003-06-23 12:24 PM


Yep I know the feeling....welcome to our world
Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2003-06-23 12:33 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh my gosh, I think we all have this feeling every now and then, but with your golden heart, you are bound to have poetry forever fill your soul, yay! This is a marvelous debut, I love it! Welcome to passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I ca't wait to read more of your fabulous poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Ceinwyn
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6 posted 2003-06-23 12:35 PM


enjoyed and welcome

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Midnitesun
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Gaia
7 posted 2003-06-23 12:47 PM


LOL at your muse, is she related to mine?
Welcome to Passions!

Muses are fickle. Best to sit back and read, reply, and have some fun until that creature coughs up another poetic post.

Krawdad
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8 posted 2003-06-23 01:57 PM


Clever opening!
Welcome to da'joint!

Kraw'

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Hurricane Alley
9 posted 2003-06-23 07:28 PM


Welcome to the family. I liked the 'sing song' quality of this poem. And I HATE it when I get writers block!!!
littlewing
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10 posted 2003-06-23 07:29 PM


Bonfire:

Welcome to PIP!
I love your writing . . .
heheh sounds familiar
You will love it here
xxoo

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
11 posted 2003-06-23 07:33 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
I know you will love it here!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

passing shadows
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displaced
12 posted 2003-06-24 05:31 AM


Welcome!

I know what you write about all too well!

Rose Petal
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13 posted 2003-06-24 06:40 AM


Welcome to passions! you write well!
Artic Wind
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14 posted 2008-08-13 01:39 PM




WELCOME TO PIP!


ARCTIC WIND

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