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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-06-23 10:38 AM




The hours
carved
our locked limbs

like puzzle
played by
and were gone

like missing piece.

[This message has been edited by gemjop (06-23-2003 10:39 AM).]

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Bonfirelight
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since 2003-06-19
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1 posted 2003-06-23 10:40 AM


that conjours up all sorts of imagery.
works well

JilGirl
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since 2003-05-24
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Washington
2 posted 2003-06-23 10:45 AM



like puzzle
played by
and were gone


Few words, MUCH told!
Kept my imagination
and my mind guessing.  
A well penned and rather
illusive write!

Blessings!
Shirl

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
3 posted 2003-06-23 11:27 AM


ambiguous writing, but methinks i understand..few words but volumes said
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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4 posted 2003-06-23 11:39 AM


Bless you gemma . . . I do understand
xxoo

Ericc
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5 posted 2003-06-23 04:21 PM


Awesome.
Eric

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2003-06-24 06:01 AM


very cool
gemjop
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7 posted 2003-06-24 07:01 AM


thankyou my lovelies. i didnt particularly feel at all comfortable with this one. got so much to say, but it wont come out. grrrr.


Artic Wind
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8 posted 2008-08-13 01:40 PM


You have a way with words Gem!
I always like to read your pieces


ARCTIC WIND

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