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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-06-23 05:41 AM


Revealing My
Saddest Feelings

Physically close together.
Emotionally far apart.
Yesterdays broken bonds.
Now todays failures.
Still breaking
my heart.

JamesLee
June23
2003
for
my
three
sons



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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-06-23 08:12 AM


sorry
gemjop
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2 posted 2003-06-23 08:14 AM


james, the simplicity of how sadness gets to us, is heartbreaking in itself isnt it? you showed it beautifully here.

do get back to your cheery self soon.

much love and hugs
gem xxxx

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-06-23 03:01 PM


Thank you passing shadows and gemjob for the nice remarks...some mistakes made in the past have lasting results that affect the now...James
QjQ
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4 posted 2003-06-28 03:07 AM


expressing yourself sometimes helps,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


timothysangel1973
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5 posted 2003-06-28 04:20 AM


Awwww, heres a hug James....from a thousand miles away....

    

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2003-06-28 05:04 AM


Thank you QjQ and timothysangel for the nice thoughts...much appreciated...James
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