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redheart angrybraids
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0 posted 2003-06-23 04:27 AM



i am here now,
golding a subsequent history,
tremling in a frame of mind

if i stop the wind
i can hear the rain,
and chimes melt into my memory

these colors have always
created me calmly.

and my simple will
is wraped around
the essence of communication
without english....,, .rule,


wet embers reflect
all that i am to the surrendering
moon of emotion,

blueness comes to me in
direct round women and
of the fragrance of day.

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids


© Copyright 2003 Amelia A. Ensign - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2003-06-23 05:30 AM


Enjoyed...James
JilGirl
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2 posted 2003-06-23 05:54 AM


Enjoyed your way with words!
Most interesting. Good write!
Blessings!
Shirl

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never ruffle them!

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2003-06-23 06:06 AM


*cartwheels*

Oh Amelia.........spindizzy happy to see you.
It is such a gift to find you gracing the pages--like seeing you is like seeing leprechauns! You haven't changed a thing about your writing and I want to thank you for that, this?

"blueness comes to me in
direct round women and
of the fragrance of day."

This screams archetype and Goddess worship and just the dropping of the bogus to a simpler way of thinking. You are colors amelia--I've missed you.

brian sites
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4 posted 2003-06-23 06:25 AM


these colors have always
created me calmly.

and my simple will
is wraped around
the essence of communication
without english....,, .rule,

you got that right
wonderful

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-06-23 07:36 AM


you've been missed!
Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2003-06-23 09:26 AM


RedHeartsAngryBraids~
Sweet lady ... this is GOOD !
My favorite thought -

'wet embers reflect
all that i am to the surrendering
moon of emotion'


How beautiful !

Good to see you sweetie~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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7 posted 2003-06-23 09:30 AM


Whenever I see your name, I know that I am in for a thrill of words. Thankyou for sharing this with us. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Bonfirelight
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since 2003-06-19
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8 posted 2003-06-23 09:48 AM


As a newcomer i was waiting for words which captured me, before i ventured my first reply.

Job done. thank you.

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Gaia
9 posted 2003-06-23 11:59 AM


Yep, I love the way you communicate emotion, wrapped in color.
Aenimal
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10 posted 2003-06-23 12:05 PM


wet embers reflect
all that i am to the surrendering
moon of emotion,

amazing writing loved it all of course but these stood out for me

Ceinwyn
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11 posted 2003-06-23 12:48 PM


I echo everyone simply amazing write enjoyed

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Earth Angel
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12 posted 2003-06-23 12:56 PM


"these colors have always created me calmly"---one of several uniquely descriptive lines that captured my imagination...

Wonderful write!

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel


serenity blaze
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13 posted 2003-06-23 09:54 PM


came back to read, and wanted everybody else to as well. and yes, I'm saving this'n.

I love the way you think things NEW, and ancient all at once.

You are special, and I pray that you know that--and? I hope everybody in your life does too.

You are a warm breeze blowing on a cold day.

and yes, you have been missed.


Artic Wind
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14 posted 2008-08-12 10:16 PM


Enjoyed this write!


ARCTIC WIND

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