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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2003-06-22 11:06 PM


senseless, commonality
me, i'm nothing compared to you.
hopeless, normality
me, i'm nothing like you.

Unworthy of your praise,
can't measure up to your ways,
I'm stuck under your gaze.
For the rest of my days.

                   Love,
             xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
*My poetry website
http://www.freewebs.com/poettree/

© Copyright 2003 Kellie M. Cantrell - All Rights Reserved
ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923
my own state
1 posted 2003-06-22 11:13 PM


funny I just wrote a poem on depression..read it please...you will measure up to the eyes of someone for sure, life has some difficult lessons to endure

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (06-22-2003 11:14 PM).]

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2003-06-22 11:17 PM


I have felt these feelings before. Especially when my parents say no guy is ever gonna like me because I am overweight. Yet one day they will be proved wrong when Liam comes for me. Awesome write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York
3 posted 2003-06-22 11:48 PM


its all good... im not depressed.. this poem is very happy!

                   Love,
             xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
*My poetry website
http://www.freewebs.com/poettree/

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2003-06-23 08:51 AM


like this lots
El_Campeador
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since 2003-01-29
Posts 761
Ohio, USA
5 posted 2003-06-23 08:56 AM


Sometimes seeing yourself unworthy is not an act of putting yourself down, but seeing how special someone else is...

~El Campeador

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York
6 posted 2003-07-13 03:34 AM


Exactly what the poem was designed to mean!

                   Love,
             xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
*My poetry website
http://www.freewebs.com/poettree/

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