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ecrivan
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my own state

0 posted 2003-06-22 10:39 PM


Lonesome penny on a rug fringe
spilt from a pocket during binge
will it see the comfort of another hand
or left to accrue sendiment..let to stand

that a lucky day will still evolve
I pick up pennies with strong resolve
they lie on the ground and feel dejected
was a time when the penny was respected



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just out of reach
1 posted 2003-06-22 10:42 PM


I still pick them up too!! Love this little write. Chris
ecrivan
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2 posted 2003-06-22 10:48 PM


I think the last was I found was near a comunal washing machine..even remember where..hehe

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passing shadows
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JilGirl
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4 posted 2003-06-23 10:05 AM


Great write!

Thanks for the "thanks"!
And, you're most welcome!

Blessings!
Shirl

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

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5 posted 2008-08-11 12:06 PM


Enjoyed!


ARCTIC WIND

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