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Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-06-22 08:45 PM

Snow comes in loops
What a faulty plan I'd had
barefoot and dancing

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-06-22 08:48 PM

Very interesting imagery here Meghan.
Well done.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

JilGirl
Member

since 2003-05-24

Posts 364
Washington

2 posted 2003-06-22 09:57 PM

Made my feet cold!

Clever write!

Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-06-23 09:19 AM

awesome!

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

4 posted 2003-06-24 08:38 AM

Thank you for that!!! My air conditioner isn't working...This helped!!!!!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

5 posted 2003-06-24 09:13 AM

Barefoot and dancing
In winters breath cold and damp
Dreams of white beaches

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2003-06-24 10:50 AM

Right about now, I'd say that that would be a very good plan! Dancing barefoot in the snow would help cool me down considerably!

Luvs 'n hugs,
EA

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

7 posted 2003-06-24 01:36 PM

Kaoru, you and Paula make quite a perfect pair when it comes to haiku. Wonderfully done, both of you, imagery is superb. I think you now have "brrrrrrrfeet."

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

8 posted 2003-06-24 02:45 PM

dislike the cold, but the snow is certainly beautiful...leaving a world so serenly quiet and crispy...enjoyed your poem very much.

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

9 posted 2003-07-02 04:40 PM

A hoola hoop with snow. Cold, but what fun!

Deb

Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

10 posted 2003-07-02 07:11 PM

Oh!!!!! You guys. Snow is a four letter word.Bad, bad. No snow until next winter. HeeHee
Good one.
Bonnie j

Cruina
Junior Member

since 2003-07-01

Posts 16
Virginia

11 posted 2003-07-02 07:15 PM

loved the imagery... don't usually enjoy haiku but this one really struck me...

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