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LastMoments
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0 posted 06-22-2003 06:35 PM       View Profile for LastMoments   Email LastMoments   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LastMoments


Inside is raped by everything
That ever could have been
And now I lie inside
While my head here spins
Took my heart and pricked it
To irritate its nerve
Made the world a better place
Rather then a blur
Made the world twist itself
To see its other blend
Now I look inside its eyes
To bring about the end

The wounds wont dry up
Fresh and beating
The pain inside
Low and feeding
The tears inside still flowing thin
A river lit  the ground
Nice of you to walk on it
While you beat me down

I wish I could hide away
For you to abuse me
For you to make me
For you to destroy me
And then to throw me away
I'd love to see it
I'd love to find the time
That you say that it
No longer matters
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QjQ
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1 posted 06-22-2003 09:01 PM       View Profile for QjQ   Email QjQ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for QjQ

very good thoughts expressed,,,

enjoyed the read...

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
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2 posted 06-26-2003 02:11 AM       View Profile for timothysangel1973   Email timothysangel1973   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit timothysangel1973's Home Page   View IP for timothysangel1973

WOW!

I'm speechless!

passing shadows
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3 posted 06-26-2003 02:13 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

good write, sad, but good
Artic Wind
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4 posted 03-30-2009 07:34 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

yay, sad, but what a good write!


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