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LastMoments
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since 2003-03-07
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0 posted 2003-06-22 06:35 PM



Inside is raped by everything
That ever could have been
And now I lie inside
While my head here spins
Took my heart and pricked it
To irritate its nerve
Made the world a better place
Rather then a blur
Made the world twist itself
To see its other blend
Now I look inside its eyes
To bring about the end

The wounds wont dry up
Fresh and beating
The pain inside
Low and feeding
The tears inside still flowing thin
A river lit  the ground
Nice of you to walk on it
While you beat me down

I wish I could hide away
For you to abuse me
For you to make me
For you to destroy me
And then to throw me away
I'd love to see it
I'd love to find the time
That you say that it
No longer matters

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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
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1 posted 2003-06-22 09:01 PM


very good thoughts expressed,,,

enjoyed the read...

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


timothysangel1973
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since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725
Never close enough
2 posted 2003-06-26 02:11 AM


WOW!

I'm speechless!


passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2003-06-26 02:13 AM


good write, sad, but good
Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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4 posted 2009-03-30 07:34 PM


yay, sad, but what a good write!


ARCTIC WIND

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