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LeeJ
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0 posted 2003-06-22 06:28 PM


Great Tall Ships – We Are the Sailors

Four oceans love, channels to unswerving congruency
Understanding course, vitality, your own marina
Gathering blends, such pools harmonized each by another
Endless oceanic spheres
Concept akin to John Sutter,
Discovering
Vast golden wealth within his land
Generating beautifully, unique shores internal
Life maintaining reason with blends
Enlivened, enriched by one another. ascends
Sacred pirate’s treasure, found and pleased
Not one could be charted, within a single degree
Discovery of such temperate isle of sea
Spirit of consciousness
Creation to a melodious correlation
Poise and harmony of each is enhanced
A sailor’s treasure, determination
Mangrove of music, fragile, how still you are
By each hue of pastel into the ocean’s dimension & essence
Substance of each, is neither every one of, or not
Yet most precious vehemence within self, perplexed
Nautical where a parallel of mutual receptiveness unwinds
She sails the vessel, winds a blowin
Voices harmonize, souls a knowin
Effortlessly pondering joy….songs of life
Believe there is great self-significance in life and yours
Light of Heaven mixed for thousands of years
Languid water ways and pools humility
Fidelity, patience, simplicity, modest and unique
Blossoming sweetly your little ways
Virtue rests within the silence of her rolling tides and odyssey
Be about for the waves, we are viewing heartening verve
Consortium, by the hand of a nerve
Deep inner-sense, self-value nurture and preserve
Follow your dream oh sailor mine, go to the sea and view
A mystery she provides, bask within her tunes and hues
Yours to embrace, your gift to swell and learn
Thoughtfulness of heart, hence, how is happiness discerned?
Love, can one associate the entire venture?
Oh as if to sail, on Ocean’s grand adventure!
The prima facie of quest and gladness
Yet the experience, the journey sways amidst the tatters
Together forever amid the waves
Great gift, balanced diverse to navigate affirmation
Life of the captain & his vessel, divine intervention
To breathe the breath of dawns new, together drifts
Within the history, of ocean’s valor, and of the great tall ships

We are the sailors!

1991 by Lee J.

© Copyright 2003 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
MARK V SHELDON
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1 posted 2003-06-22 06:49 PM


Deep yet up-lifting with a lung-full of exultation-- definitely necessitates a few re-reads to let the intent sink in...

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Martie
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2 posted 2003-06-22 06:58 PM


LeeJ

You fill me up with images and the inspiration I feel coming from you in this poem..your exuberance is catching.  Enjoyed!

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-06-22 07:02 PM


Enjoyed this "Ocean's grand adventure"!

All the world's an ocean, and we're the sailors on it!

A descriptive, energetic, and imaginative write!

Warm hugs,
EA

Artic Wind
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4 posted 2008-08-07 03:59 PM


Nice Write Leej


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