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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-06-22 05:48 PM


Passage of Time

I miss you.
I yearn to kiss you
until the end of time.
Feeling the pleasure
of your sweet lips
brushing softly against
the pleasure of mine.
Caressing your beautiful
face within the passion
of loves silky embrace.

Come to me my sweet.
Give me my silky treat.
You are my precious thrill.
Do with me what you will.
Our love will improve
like a fine aged wine
with each shared kiss
in the passage of time.

JamesLee
June22
2003



© Copyright 2003 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-06-22 06:14 PM


This is really pretty, James.
A very good poem.  
Hugs  
Ethel

LeeJ
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2 posted 2003-06-22 06:34 PM


one finds the other half of self within that special love...beautiful thoughts and write
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3 posted 2003-06-23 01:23 AM




(sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I just love the analogy to a fine wine, imaginer what it will taste like another century from now, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

A Romantic Heart
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4 posted 2003-06-23 02:46 AM


Reminds me of the song "Time In A Bottle"
Which happens to one of my favorites!

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5 posted 2003-06-23 03:20 AM


"Do with me what you will."

Whewwww, that one could get ya into some trouble....HaHa

Great write!

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JamesMichael
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6 posted 2003-06-23 05:44 AM


Thank you garysgirl, LeeJ, Noah, Romantic Heart and Tima for the nice responses.
Tima I certainly hope so...James

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7 posted 2003-06-23 08:11 AM


nice!
gemjop
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8 posted 2003-06-23 08:18 AM


i think, this is my favourite of yours yet mr!

silky and free flowing.

ethome
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9 posted 2003-06-23 08:54 AM


James
This is really nice!

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10 posted 2008-08-10 11:51 PM


Lovely!

ARCTIC WIND

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