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Open Poetry #27
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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-06-22 02:38 PM



Golden pride
hushes me
~I know~

Silver tongue
should be cut
~I feel~

Rainbow blue
festering words
~I taste~


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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2003-06-22 02:51 PM


Ebony
envelopes me
I think.



Interesting stuff here, leads me to, well, THINK.

Magnus
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2 posted 2003-06-22 02:53 PM


Imagine Karen thinking...hmmm,  this little
ditty does indeed cause that to happen...
to more than just her...

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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3 posted 2003-06-22 02:55 PM


gemma . . . this is palpable
awesome and bitter
sweet
xxoo

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2003-06-22 08:53 PM


Talented poetess
Impresses me
~ I know!

Huggums sweetums!
EA

Decaflame
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5 posted 2003-06-22 08:57 PM



I think you did a 20 or less...with some remarkable aplomb.  Well done, Gemma.

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
6 posted 2003-06-22 11:51 PM


loved this
passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2003-06-23 08:48 AM


yep, very cool write
Artic Wind
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8 posted 2008-08-10 11:50 PM


I know and I see!-- this is a great write!


ARCTIC WIND

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