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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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Ocean's cool breeze Sand beneath my feet On my knees Beneath the stars Eyes closed Celestial blanket Wrapping around my soul I'm falling Under... Under this spell Beneath these thoughts Running far from these tears Back to where I came from I'm falling Faster than the speed Of light Spiralling into sweet bliss Crawling out of The dark abyss My thoughts are fading faster My lips wet From an ocean's kiss Intoxicated by the cool breeze I'm falling Under.. Under this spell... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (06-22-2003 01:31 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Nice spell to fall under! PS..I love the color of this post! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
bump..why this was back there I'll never know..great write Kr |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wish I was there too |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
this is very nice, a keeper |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Kristen, very very nice indeed hun. just noticed your signature, ohhh it made me laugh.  |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
excellent! glad i didn't miss this one. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kris? beautiful . . . just beautiful May the spell be a good one indeed xxoo |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah..as you travelled past the speed of light did the law or relativity dictate a move to slower or reversed time??? does it mean then you returned to someplace you had been before...and now find again..but in a changed way.. enjoyed the piece..and please forgive my digression into tangent thought... |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
thanx guys and gem I'm glad my signature made you laugh and hey cpat lol it's all good  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I got so caught up in your dreamy descriptions, I could scarcely breathe...  Warm hugs, EA |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Ocean's cool breeze Sand beneath my feet On my knees Beneath the stars Eyes closed Celestial blanket Wrapping around my soul..............." Lovely Write  ARCTIC WIND |
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