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Kellie_Cantrell
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0 posted 2003-06-22 01:10 PM


The creamy substance that daily is rubbed on my heart.
Blue; silky, gentle and sweet smelling liquid,
lathered onto me.
Passionate lotion, if we could call it but that.
Softening the sad spots, roughening the soft spots,
passion's lotion,
where would any of us be without it?

                   Love,
             xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
*My poetry website
http://www.freewebs.com/poettree/

© Copyright 2003 Kellie M. Cantrell - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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1 posted 2003-06-22 01:20 PM


burned

nice write, Kellie

Kellie_Cantrell
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2 posted 2003-06-22 01:22 PM


burned? what is that supposed to mean? Anyway, thanks for the reply

                   Love,
             xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
*My poetry website
http://www.freewebs.com/poettree/

QjQ
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3 posted 2003-06-24 04:39 PM


enjoyed,,,
Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-06-24 06:16 PM


Kellie, what a lovely and creative way to express your appreciation of the poetic works and replies of our poetic family! That was really sweet!--and I know just what you mean!

Thank you for spreading some of that Passion's soothing lotion on us!

Warm, lovin' hugs,
EA

nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2003-06-24 08:01 PM


Like Earth Angel, I understood this to be  how much passions and the poetry here soothes one.

Thanks Kellie, very nicely done
hugs
M

Larry C
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6 posted 2003-06-24 08:44 PM


Kellie,
It is the answer to your last quesion. "Where would we be without it?" You know Kacy. Short and two the point. Nice write, btw.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

timothysangel1973
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7 posted 2003-06-26 05:41 PM


Wunnerful  

I loved it!

Kellie_Cantrell
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8 posted 2003-07-13 03:34 AM


Hey Larry, who is Kacy? me or someone else?

                   Love,
             xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
*My poetry website
http://www.freewebs.com/poettree/

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