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HopeS
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0 posted 2003-06-22 11:50 AM



Where Twilight Tones Blend

As the sun surrounded
I was embraced alone
Listening to the sound
Of each sea-shell cone

Behind on rocky cliffs
Birds resting on ledges
Seaweed begins to pile
Skirting water’s edges

As each wave rolls in
Shaping sand grooves
A crab scurries on by
Sidelong in its moves

From the rock to sand
Slowly strolling along
Basking in sand dunes
A lizard darts its tongue

Shimmers over the sea
The twilight tones blend
Neath red and pink sky
A day reaches the end

Walking the boardwalk
Whispered waves roar
As sun descends ocean
I farewell the seashore

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Gaia
1 posted 2003-06-22 12:59 PM


God, I miss walking along the beach at sunset! *sigh*
beautifully written, Hope

BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2003-06-22 01:04 PM


Shimmers over the sea
The twilight tones blend
Neath red and pink sky
A day reaches the end

It is indeed, the nicest time of day, and through the beauty of your words you have made it come alive.  

This is lovely Hope~


HopeS
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3 posted 2003-06-22 01:36 PM


Thanks yes we had beautiful sunset yesterday and I live only minutes away from the ocean , it can so often be inspiring

Hope

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4 posted 2003-06-23 09:21 AM


a classic Hope write
Sunshine
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5 posted 2003-06-23 09:36 AM



Loved the title...and enjoyed the entire poem.  Thanks for allowing me that time to walk with you.

JaiOfHeaven
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6 posted 2003-07-16 05:07 AM


Same here...you kept my mind entertained and soul at an equal.
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