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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2003-06-22 05:00 AM



I will show your hands the way
come here naked now to me
I will stand here just as new
come here, still my trembling
and I blush and blush again
knowing that you saw me there
gazing shyly through my hair
hanging in my face

praying

you will smile.

© Copyright 2003 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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JamesMichael
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2 posted 2003-06-22 06:21 AM


Absolutely...James
JilGirl
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3 posted 2003-06-22 06:46 AM


Prayers DO get answered!

Terrific write!

Blessings!
Shirl

Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands.

Margherita
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Eternity
4 posted 2003-06-22 09:28 AM


Gasp!
Great write!
Love, Margherita

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2003-06-22 09:33 AM


serenity,
You made me smile.

icebox
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in the shadows
6 posted 2003-06-22 10:22 AM


You started my day very nicely, thank you.
Midnitesun
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Gaia
7 posted 2003-06-22 10:24 AM


Now you've done it, serene witchygal, you've MADE me smile, even through a blinding headache!

Sunshine
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8 posted 2003-06-22 11:44 AM



Oh, yes......

brian sites
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9 posted 2003-06-22 11:58 AM



Nightshade
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just out of reach
10 posted 2003-06-22 12:13 PM


Karen, you're words are amazing. I think I have told you that before....but I will continue to .... always. Chris
Local Rebel
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11 posted 2003-06-22 12:19 PM


*closing the door*

oops -- sorry, didn't know anyone was in here.. just.. um...   carry on.. now.. um...

*placing the 'Do Not Disturb' sign on the knob*

Duncan
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12 posted 2003-06-22 12:28 PM


Positively beamin' baby!!!!!!!  
serenity blaze
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13 posted 2003-06-22 02:27 PM


Prayers answered.

Thank you.

dreambuilder
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caddyshack
14 posted 2003-06-22 05:57 PM


God Karen - this is beautiful . . .
xxoo

garysgirl
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15 posted 2003-06-22 06:04 PM


Well, Lady, from the replies
your prayers were definitely answered.  

A lot said in a few words, huh?  
Hugs to ya  
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-22-2003 06:05 PM).]

Martie
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16 posted 2003-06-22 06:09 PM



LeeJ
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17 posted 2003-06-22 07:20 PM


beautiful thoughts and a lovely mind...
vlraynes
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18 posted 2003-06-22 08:31 PM



    


Sorry...couldn't resist..LOL.
Love ya, lady...


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (06-22-2003 08:39 PM).]

redheart angrybraids
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19 posted 2003-06-23 04:14 AM


time
what do we do with it,

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids


inkedgoddess
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20 posted 2003-06-23 04:42 AM


you - a blusher !!!!!!!!!!!
oh come now...........
this is very pretty, very sweet ,
and soft

Susan Caldwell
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21 posted 2003-06-23 07:55 AM


Karen..who wouldn't smile?  You radiate beauty!  

As for me, I smile every time I see a new poem by you...so thank you for making me smile.

Susan

timothysangel1973
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22 posted 2003-06-26 02:04 AM


Wonderful poetry!
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
23 posted 2009-03-30 07:26 PM


oh dear, how lovely! ~ Enjoyed this


ARCTIC WIND

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