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praying you will smile

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serenity blaze
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I will show your hands the way
come here naked now to me
I will stand here just as new
come here, still my trembling
and I blush and blush again
knowing that you saw me there
gazing shyly through my hair
hanging in my face

praying

you will smile.
© Copyright 2003 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
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JamesMichael
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Absolutely...James
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Prayers DO get answered!

Terrific write!

Blessings!
Shirl

Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands.

Margherita
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Gasp!
Great write!
Love, Margherita
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 06-22-2003 09:33 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

serenity,
You made me smile.
icebox
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You started my day very nicely, thank you.
Midnitesun
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Now you've done it, serene witchygal, you've MADE me smile, even through a blinding headache!
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Oh, yes......
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Nightshade
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10 posted 06-22-2003 12:13 PM       View Profile for Nightshade   Email Nightshade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nightshade's Home Page   View IP for Nightshade

Karen, you're words are amazing. I think I have told you that before....but I will continue to .... always. Chris
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*closing the door*

oops -- sorry, didn't know anyone was in here.. just.. um...   carry on.. now.. um...

*placing the 'Do Not Disturb' sign on the knob*
Duncan
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Positively beamin' baby!!!!!!!  
serenity blaze
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Prayers answered.

Thank you.
dreambuilder
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God Karen - this is beautiful . . .
xxoo
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Well, Lady, from the replies
your prayers were definitely answered.  

A lot said in a few words, huh?  
Hugs to ya  
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-22-2003 06:05 PM).]

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LeeJ
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beautiful thoughts and a lovely mind...
vlraynes
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Sorry...couldn't resist..LOL.
Love ya, lady...


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (06-22-2003 08:39 PM).]

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time
what do we do with it,

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids

inkedgoddess
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you - a blusher !!!!!!!!!!!
oh come now...........
this is very pretty, very sweet ,
and soft
Susan Caldwell
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Karen..who wouldn't smile?  You radiate beauty!  

As for me, I smile every time I see a new poem by you...so thank you for making me smile.

Susan
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Wonderful poetry!
Artic Wind
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oh dear, how lovely! ~ Enjoyed this


ARCTIC WIND
 
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