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“Candy Gleam”

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Second Self
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0 posted 06-21-2003 11:29 PM       View Profile for Second Self   Email Second Self   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Second Self

“Candy Gleam”

A new quirk and phrase and stumbled upon word that lightens by surprise,
This unicity sprouts and spirals upward in florescence to fly,
Rests on my shoulder and accompanies like music,
These thoughts of you.

Life’s wonder like vivid embers branching to fade like vespertine glitter,
Or flaws of others colored over in gentle hues of voice and splendor,
Your portrait lends rapture to a spirit now in trial,
These thoughts of you.

From orbiting smiles melodically suspended swirling to tire caught eyes,
To first scenes of fallen cotton, those decorating white butterflies,
Toward pine needles, gifts, and tinsel surreal,
These thoughts of you.

Yet in prologue with acts unwritten, holds promise to a sequitur so beautiful,
This remembrance and preface gives pride to a guardian in shadow,
A keepsake, scribble, and your precious picture,
Brings thoughts of you - dear little Sister.


"www.miserymadebeautiful.com"



© Copyright 2003 M. Wiktor - All Rights Reserved
wranx
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1 posted 06-22-2003 12:33 AM       View Profile for wranx   Email wranx   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wranx

You MUST! Absolutely MUST, read this for her.

And keep it for her, because it will change over the years, as she does.

Damned good!
Second Self
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2 posted 06-22-2003 12:36 AM       View Profile for Second Self   Email Second Self   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Second Self

Hey Thanks Wranx...
Glad you liked it...
passing shadows
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3 posted 06-22-2003 04:55 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

wonderful write! just perfect!
nakdthoughts
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4 posted 06-22-2003 08:25 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

These thoughts of you...

wonderful writing

M
brian sites
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5 posted 06-23-2003 06:20 AM       View Profile for brian sites   Email brian sites   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian sites

a keepsake scribble
QjQ
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6 posted 06-24-2003 04:52 PM       View Profile for QjQ   Email QjQ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for QjQ

enjoyed,,,
Earth Angel
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7 posted 06-24-2003 04:58 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Enjoyed your sentiments, verbiage, imagery, and your beautiful soul that you so lovingly poured into this poem for your sister. You are both blessed!

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel
Artic Wind
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8 posted 01-24-2009 11:32 AM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Wonderful Write Indeed!
~I'm a little too late on the commenting, but you should


ARCTIC WIND
Kenwood1234
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9 posted 09-25-2011 04:24 PM       View Profile for Kenwood1234   Email Kenwood1234   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Kenwood1234

I should of read it to her.

I'm sorry Jackie. I love you always.

Mikey
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