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LastMoments
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since 2003-03-07
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0 posted 2003-06-21 11:18 PM



You took my eyes
Wrapped them shut, close inside
Took them in
Scarred them in boundless lies
Showed the way
The way only you could find
Now  the truth
Nowthe truth falls to lies

Take apart
Make me bleed deep within
Take my heart
Make it seep in glycerine
Make it hope
On everything it cannot be
Make these hopes
Be parts of ancient history
Make me cling
To everything I cannot be
Make me hold
The one thing
The one thing I can never be

Reach up for the stars
To be buried far into the ground
Make the pain
Ring inside in silent sound
Make the sound
Grow to be eternity
Let your face
Be the last thing that I'll ever see
Make this last
Make this be eternity
I'll miss you
Till the day eternity
Is no more.

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Justbleu
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1 posted 2003-06-22 09:20 AM


Intersting way to express these things.....
Enjoyed!!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2003-06-22 10:30 AM


this aches

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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3 posted 2003-06-24 04:40 PM


terrific,,,
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2009-01-23 02:05 PM




ARCTIC WIND

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