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This scar..

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Kaoru
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0 posted 06-21-2003 10:57 PM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kaoru

There was a scar
on the nape
of your neck
just below the
peach fuzz hair that would
stand on end as I
let my graceful lips slip
across it.
The flesh was
uneven, almost
like a deformity, but
it had a story, there was a reason,
you weren't born with it
yet..
it craves me, my touch,
it serves me,
this scar..
© Copyright 2003 Meghan Armitage - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 06-21-2003 11:01 PM       View Profile for eminor_angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for eminor_angel

I love this! I enjoyed one of your earlier poems, too, i believe it was called "hands". I have so many scars, inner and outer. Keep writing, I love your style!

ps. please check out my work sometime!

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Meghan!  Wow!!!!!
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now I am wondering......that's another story.....Great write
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good write
Artic Wind
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5 posted 03-30-2009 07:54 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Now this is good ~ Opens many different stories and levels of depth!


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