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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2003-06-21 08:21 PM






~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 2003-06-21 08:23 PM


awesomely beautifully sad and just what I feel at times
Patricia
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2 posted 2003-06-21 08:30 PM


Marge,
Darn it all, you are doing it again today...choking back those tears.  But this is fine with me for you verses are so lovely...Well worth the tears!

Patricia

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3 posted 2003-06-21 08:49 PM



Marge~
The title drew me in and the 'raindrops' held me here.
Loving this one.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (06-21-2003 08:50 PM).]

Betty
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4 posted 2003-06-21 11:14 PM


Oh Marge this is so good. I love it.
Betty

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5 posted 2003-06-21 11:31 PM


wrapped in rain and memories, what a lovely
feeling you portrayed

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6 posted 2003-06-22 10:25 PM


Dear Marge:  Rain always makes it worse, when you are having sad thoughts! Like the whole world is crying with you.

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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7 posted 2003-06-22 10:44 PM


Very lovely Marge. hugs, Chris
Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2003-07-31 10:08 AM


I so appreciate the kindness of your comments on this little piece~
There's just something about the rain that spills soft drops-of-remember~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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9 posted 2003-07-31 02:45 PM


Oh Marge, my friend... have you been peeking into my heart again? I've been doing a lot of that arm-crossing... but it's just not the same. *S* Lovely write!
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10 posted 2003-07-31 02:49 PM


Hauntingly beautiful Marge...
The rain does have that effect on me as well.
~Hugs and soft smiles, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

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11 posted 2003-07-31 04:58 PM


I guess I'm a glutton for punishment, but I have to :keep: this one. It is just so profound and beautifully written.


Linda

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