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Light my fire

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dreambuilder
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0 posted 06-21-2003 03:52 PM       View Profile for dreambuilder   Email dreambuilder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for dreambuilder


Oh join me my friend
enable me to visage
as I hold you in conditional love
ready to curse you
if you fail me

Your presence assures me
as I constantly check for you

I am amazed at your stamina
come
Light my need

. . . all that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream  . . .

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BluesSerenade
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1 posted 06-21-2003 04:10 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

I loved the sense of longing in this.
Nice one dreambuilder~
littlewing
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2 posted 06-22-2003 12:29 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

Ok reaching for my smokes . . . .
LMAO
awesome write
xxoo

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3 posted 06-22-2003 04:57 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

strong write...
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4 posted 06-23-2003 08:38 PM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

. . . this needs to breathe . . .
passing shadows
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5 posted 06-24-2003 05:16 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

inhale...exhale...
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Never close enough


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"as I hold you in conditional love
ready to curse you
if you fail me"   If ever the truth were spoken....this is it!

I loved it
Artic Wind
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7 posted 03-30-2009 07:26 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Ouu, i enjoyed this! ~ I like the darkness in it, also the romantic vibe


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