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Magnetism Part I
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Magnetism Part I |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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 When she walked through the door he was watching every inch of her looking she felt his eyes across the crowded room Magnetism of them between Then when she sat down to order her lunch he came over asking haven't we met before She knowing they haven't He knowing the same She saying she thought not He saying but you do look so familiar As she looks at the menu He asks if he may join her She sees his empty plate at his table and look at him wondering why Knowing that he must think that she is an easy pick-up That she will surely be charmed by him his good looks his sophisticated way Oh, he does look good fitted in his perfect clothes that fit him SO well and his smell Oh that smell so masculine of cologne Even if their ages are so different there is such an attraction there A chemistry like she has NEVER felt before And he he feels the same magnetism of them between She can tell this by the way he looks at her at her every move the way she talks the way she smiles the curve of her He watches Then he tell her of a nice quiet place he knows of on the beach by the water with marvelous seafood there a dinner club where they can dance She says it sounds wonderful and tells him that he can call her....... . . To be continued...... [This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-21-2003 11:29 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
strangely how love can appear,, at any time and place.. terrific write ethel... A voice of honesty |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
What a magical moment this is. Don't you love life's little surprises!!! Hugs Ethel dear~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Ethel, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I dream maybe I can meet my dream girl suprisingly like this and see her gorgeous smile in serendipity! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Glenn, yeah, love can appear most anywhere and at anytime. But, this was mostly just writing. I was just playing with this one, I guess. Just seeing if I could do it. Thanks for reading and replying. I appreciate you  Hugs  Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Lori. Like I said above, this was mostly fantasy. I was just writing. Thanks for reading me and replying. I appreciate it. Hugs Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Noah, I hope that you meet your dream girl soon, too. I was just playing with this one...seeing if I could do it. Hugs Ethel |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Well, lets hope they live happy lives together. Love at first sight!  ARCTIC WIND |
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